Jue Xingchen

After reading it, I felt a little lost. After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to write a long review. What shocked me the most about this book was the world view. The author's imagination is really amazing. He directly constructed a brand new universe, but there is no logical bug at all. From ancient history to the current world structure, every part is written clearly, even history books and so on. In short, after reading it, it can give people a very intuitive and clear feeling about what kind of concept this world is, and it can't help but make people daydream about the whole picture of the magical continent. Then some concepts are very interesting. There are conflicts of concepts in many places throughout the text, such as "emotion", "good and evil", and "life and death". Every confrontation will show the young man's high spirits and fearlessness. Finally, I would like to give you some sincere advice. I feel that the main line is not very clear. After reading more than fifty chapters, I still don't quite understand what I am going to do and what the core of the book is. There is a "changing the world" framework, but it is a bit empty and makes people confused. It's unclear what Qianqin wants to do after resurrecting, and the future of the protagonist. And maybe daily life is indeed a bit much? (It's not called daily life, it's just dungeons. Ancient Feather Demon Yingge and those do help expand the world view, but they don't seem to promote the development of the plot.) Then there are the characters. No matter how I put it, I always feel that the characters of the dozens of people in the protagonist's group are not distinct. It seems that everyone can be summarized by words such as emphasizing friendship, strong and kind, and they do not have personalities that can make them distinguishable. I think there should be contrasts between various images in a book, such as cold and enthusiastic, domineering and treating others equally. Besides, there are quite a lot of characters in this book, so it's easy for readers to not be able to tell who is who (like me, TT). It would be much better if everyone could have some specific little actions (such as like curling hair with fingers) or specific descriptive words. I think Hai Yaou is well portrayed. The first few chapters of "I Worship Big Brother W" still felt a bit jerky, but since the beginning of the 20th chapter, there has been a significant improvement. The writing is smooth, the words are beautiful, the suspense is appetizing, and the plot is amazing. I hope the author will keep updating and look forward to the day when I see the ending! Miro brother and sister yyds!

Wow the author is so awesome! Not only is the writing superb, but the plot concept is also great! I really like this type of book. I hope the author will update it soon~ ps: Hahaha I like Kumi and Komi brother and sister [Wangchai] for no reason.

Red One=Red Armored General*blazing dragon Orange 2 = Orange Armor General * Qiu Li Huang San = General Huang Jia * Chu Yan Green Four = Green Armored General * Cypress Jade · Poetry and Wind Qingwu=General Qingjia*Jinfeng Blue Six = Blue Armored General * Li rate Ziqi=Purple Armored General*Fantasy Dragon Pink Eight=Pink Armor General*Zhexian Brown Jiu = General Brown Armor * Yuan Ci Black Ten = Black Armored General * Red Leaf Red Maple Eleven = General in White Armor * Snowflake and White Reed Twelve=General in Gray Armor*Si Wen Thirteen=Silver Armor General*Xu Ying Fourteen=Jinjia General*Li Huyangjun

In the eyes of those who are good at making malicious assumptions about others, I am just a naive clown.

Sakura grid: (10) Both parents died, living on the streets of Tianyu Sea of Flowers (14) An affair with the evil fox in Peach Blossom Valley (15) Lantern night, poetry and wind (17) (22) The first encirclement and suppression campaign seventy years ago, the valley was closed • • "Stay in Peach Blossom Valley to purify the miasma of resentment and protect the earth's veins" • • (82) Ni Mujin (60) ascended the throne (92) Peace dove accidentally enters the valley, bombing, Nth siege ---------------------- I am extremely grateful to the "enthusiastic reader" Lone Wolf Emperor for helping me, the "old man", to smooth out the timeline of this copy (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) • • PS: In this book, except for [Human species], [Kulu species] and [Animals and Plants], other races cannot judge their age based on their appearance.ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪ • • Chapter 41: "About twenty-five years old" refers to appearance • • PS: Except for characters whose appearance is particularly emphasized, please consciously set the "appearance age" of the characters within the range [5, 40]. (Ω< )★ In addition, because there are many characters in this book and their relationships are complicated, I sometimes make mistakes and I rely on your corrections. ∠(｀Ω´*) salute • • Finally, I wish you all good luck in the Year of the Tiger, may all your wishes come true in the new year, and all the best (*°∀°)=3

This book is updated monthly - no bargaining (unless the author is crazy) This book is a eunuch-unless CCTV stops broadcasting (author's accident*) This book is plagiarized - unless you are from the future Suggestions in this book - reasonable adoption The protagonist of this book - you and I are both The content of this book - the introduction cannot be summarized Tags of this book--guess it😝 (Reading is a hobby, writing is life)

"Universal World View" applies to all my works Creatures - Creatures from all directions + inanimate materials (stones, buildings, tools, etc. - May give birth to their own consciousness) Life - all living things (mostly) Humans - creatures with spiritual cores or magic arrays + human species (both can be cultivated, but the probability is almost zero) Life forms - creatures from the divine cube (a small part) + creatures from the magic cube (a small part) ―――――― Sort by range (not mutually inclusive) from largest to smallest: Creature, life, person, living body