Start into the Abyss

What can I say, after watching most of it, I still feel drowsy. The plot is dull, details are lacking, and the wording is very blunt. The character of the protagonist, as the author said, is an unsophisticated person with no independence and subjectivity, and no great courage. To be honest, if there is no golden finger, he is not even as good as an ordinary person. . . Come on.

The image of the Zhao family so far is quite plump, and it has the potential to be shaped into a gray contradiction. In this situation, no matter whether the Zhao family becomes dark or not, the result will not change. It's a matter of reducing intelligence. Why did old lady Zhao want to adopt Miao as her goddaughter? Just because you have a sweet mouth? At first I thought Miao used the power of her family, but it turned out not to be the case. Not a relative, I will accept you as my goddaughter. There is no longer any awareness of the sinister nature of the human heart. If your image is always positive, (you only want to accept her as your daughter-in-law), in the end it will be nothing more than issuing a good person card and forming a good relationship. But it would be too far-fetched to darken her to advance the plot. The darkest scenario is to send her as a eunuch, which is very likely to reduce the supporting characters' intelligence to the point where they all recognize the adopted father. (Regardless of whether the adopted son is important or not) sending a woman/sister cannot effectively build a relationship. (Because it is impossible for the eunuch to pay more attention to his brother-in-law than to his adopted son, it is more likely that the eunuch accepted the adopted son out of respect for his own ability.) The role of the Zhao family can only be to give experience. It also has an intelligence-lowering effect on the protagonist. If this is not changed, no amount of psychological description will be able to improve the protagonist's IQ. Of course, if there is a forced reconciliation later, it is said that the protagonist understands this, so it is okay to break up in Chapter 22. But I'm afraid that the author won't do detailed processing at all later on, and the protagonist will end up with the same "method of death" as Tang San. I have been reading the author's books for many years. Although many of them are for free, the recommendation votes are enough. I really don't want to be thrown into the street again.

Code it to death, do you know how it feels when I see only a dozen novels and then they are gone?

Such a clichéd start. Every day, there is either a younger sister or an older sister, and all of them are naturally beautiful. The gangsters around them all want to possess it. Then the protagonist doesn't want to say anything later. It's rubbish.

I support you unconditionally. If you continue to suck, I'll be sorry for you.

I'm very confused, why not turn Song Youning into an idiot, or control her and turn her into a puppet? Is it because Abyss also talks about human rights?

I've given you all my monthly tickets, please update soon🤞

It's very good. I hope you can continue to work hard and publish more chapters and word count. I believe that as long as you persist, at least more readers can see it [Oh my god, it's so cold today, my typing hands are frozen to death.

Is it necessary to write this character named Song? Don't you know how disgusting this character is? That lady is gone, why do you still keep it? Is it okay to kill him? Brother, don't you care about the grades of your books at all? Do you think more people will watch this character if you write it? I really can't stand it anymore. This woman should die quickly. If she dies, I'll go buy champagne.

The plot setting is very good, and the writing style is very good and comfortable to watch.