Don't Ask About the Path to Immortality

The author didn't write carefully, and there were many mistakes and omissions. It doesn't matter if there are many mistakes! There is also a fee! Since you are charging, you should be serious and worthy of the judges. There are also many chapters that are not on topic, and irrelevant people write too meticulously just to add more chapters and charge more. Sometimes I make no progress after reading three chapters. Isn't this taking advantage of the readers? Isn't it too much of a loss for you to make money like this? Moreover, the update time is also unstable, which makes readers very helpless! I hope the platform can urge corrections.

The system design is quite interesting. You can absorb other people's spiritual roots to improve your own spiritual roots, and you can also accumulate spiritual energy. But the problem is that this system does not increase your understanding. The protagonist's cultivation is fast, but the level is increased quickly, not the skill learning? If you let the protagonist suddenly realize that he has become a sword cultivator, the logic will fall apart. Moreover, the way the protagonist immediately realizes it after a big boss swings his sword looks very dramatic. Secondly, wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to be a casual cultivator in the early stages of the system? The protagonist has to join the sect for no reason, but the sand man cannot improve his spiritual roots. Isn't this a disguised form of suppressing the protagonist's level? Logically speaking, the protagonist should be an evil cultivator in the early stage to absorb the spiritual roots. His spiritual roots have been raised to the earth spiritual roots. He is talking about joining the sect. He has to enter the sect for no reason, or he can get in through a woman. This is too poisonous. The plot falls apart in the first few dozen chapters. It really wastes such good writing. And if you insist on giving the protagonist a useless spiritual root, let me ask you. If the protagonist can suddenly cultivate a useless spiritual root, do you think the protagonist can survive after letting the big guys know about it? Isn't this intentional? Too poisonous

Judging from your introduction, he is a ruthless monk, but the problem is that you also want to write him as a bad good person, which really disgusts me.

Be sick! Yao Simiao's death has nothing to do with Shen. The reason why Yao Zong was destroyed when Mo Wen was not around was because Shen came to lead the way and was destroyed. Yao Simiao died. Now he is actually helping Shen's daughter. Your former enemy married the girl you were attracted to. You still helped their daughter and went all out. The protagonist is the Holy Mother! Have you forgotten all the pitfalls the author filled in? The sb novel made me look forward to it for so long, thinking that it would make Shen pay the price, but in the end, there was a story of the Virgin Mary, killing those who should be killed, and killing those who shouldn't be killed with all your strength, sb than

What kind of garbage plot has no logic at all?

You can write about each animal's inner activities in detail, and you can probably write about it for a lifetime! Everything I read felt tedious! You work hard to make more money! Not to mention the quality of this book and the reader's experience! Just to make a few more cents, what is this?

When there is danger, you just don't run away, you insist on frantically seeking death on the verge of death, you don't know how to hide your strength, and you are so high-profile that you want the whole world to know about it. I was immediately poisoned after reading 8 chapters.

Twists and turns, exciting, top-notch masterpiece!

I update a few chapters a year, but it's hard to read and the writing is getting worse and worse. The plot content doesn't match up at all.

It's a good book. I've read a lot of online novels, but in this one article I feel that the author has quite a profound literary background.