Wizard: Starting from the Corpse Collector Apprentice to Krypton Moon Card

The plot drags on. The word "water" is a characteristic of all wizards. If you want to write brilliantly, you should get rid of this problem, but it's still the same as before. Alas, it's boring.

Wen Qing is sick, feed him a big shi. Withdrawn

The protagonist not only has to run around the city collecting corpses for a month, but also has to sew and dismantle the corpses. Anyway, the corpses are all covered, with a monthly salary of 250 yuan. Then in the next few chapters, the weekly salary of an ordinary groom is 250 yuan. The protagonist's father is a blacksmith, with a monthly salary of 1,000 yuan In summary, the groom has a future, and the protagonist's family are all idiots

The plot is so lame, I felt like sleeping while watching it. After dozens of chapters, I'm still a weakling who's allowed to be bullied.

To be honest, I couldn't read it anymore after reading fifty chapters. The plot progress is too boring. Many people think that it is normal for mortal novels to take off slowly, but in fact it is not. Just like the benchmark "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", the story of Seven Mysterious Gates at the beginning has a hundred chapters. It seems that the rhythm is difficult, but this is a story that belongs to an entire map (similar to Novice Village). Han Li embarked on the path of cultivating immortality. In the following sixty chapters, Han Li experienced the Mo Mansion incident, the immortal seeking incident, and entered the Yellow Maple Valley to cultivate to perfection. Then came the bloody trial, breaking through the foundation building, obtaining the Five Elements Reversal Formation incident, the capital demon slaying incident, and the demonic invasion incident. This second big map only had a hundred chapters, and then it was changed to the third endless sea map. For example, the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, the plot can be said to be very powerful and very sticky to readers. Comparing this book, the incident where the protagonist becomes a low-level corpse collector has more than fifty chapters written, which is too detailed. Looking at the table of contents, after writing nearly a hundred chapters, the progress has only been progressed for one month (the big moon card has been upgraded to level 50). This is not to say that the writing of this book is not good. In fact, the content is not good. The plot is also advanced, but it is too detailed and it is too boring to read. If the book is already in full and membership is free, I can fast forward and jump to read it. The author may feel that the foreshadowing plot he wrote is very thoughtful and has solid content, but it is boring for readers to read!

It's too fake, the world view is purely written by myself.