If You Start with a Bow, Your Equipment Will Become Stronger
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The new book "Kobold: Becoming Invincible from Contemplating the Sun" has been uploaded and we look forward to your attention! ............ Equipment: Training short bow Quality: gray Equipment requirements: none Explanation: This is a short bow with rough workmanship and inferior materials. You cannot place too many demands on it except for practice. Effect: Weakly improve the training efficiency of basic archery ............ This is the story of a time traveler who relies on his equipment to become the strongest adventurer step by step!
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Official(40)Scraped 2d ago
The protagonist's ability to portray the character is too poor, and he prefers to cut out the characterization, portraying the protagonist as a dull idiot, who does not seem to have traveled from modern society at all. Mrs. Mei Li, a superfluous character, should not have been written at all. Judging from the author's setting background of the novel, the use of Goldfinger, and the main plot of the novel. They are all pretty good, and I can read a little more if I bite the bullet. I hope the author will not get too involved in the characterization and emotional description of the characters. Your writing style is really not good, and it will delay your novel.
It doesn't look good, it doesn't look good, it doesn't look good! ! ! ! Say important things three times!
I have read about twenty chapters, and it feels like I was reading an online game novel more than ten years ago.
In the first chapter, I saw that the inner drama was so satisfying that it didn't feel like time travel at all, so I didn't want to read it.
It's been a long time since I've seen a novel protagonist with two names. Wu's name is in his previous life, and his name in this life is Maas. I didn't even feel that I could relate to it.
I just read the previous 20 chapters. To be honest, I feel that I need both, including bows, arrows, swords, and staffs. The key is not to provide space for arrangement. Normally, the image of an archer is not only a quiver on the back, a bow and arrow in the hand, but also a dagger hanging on the waist. And some details are not well connected. For example, you don't even tell your teacher that you want the equipment, and you get it inexplicably.
It doesn't look like something for adults.
The writing is quite natural, the storyline is not contrived, it is the writing style of an experienced author.
It's so good, the author quickly started coding
The part about rescuing his teacher is too unrealistic. Just risk your own life. Those adventurers will also risk their lives with you. Are you serious?
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Official(40)Scraped 2d ago
The protagonist's ability to portray the character is too poor, and he prefers to cut out the characterization, portraying the protagonist as a dull idiot, who does not seem to have traveled from modern society at all. Mrs. Mei Li, a superfluous character, should not have been written at all. Judging from the author's setting background of the novel, the use of Goldfinger, and the main plot of the novel. They are all pretty good, and I can read a little more if I bite the bullet. I hope the author will not get too involved in the characterization and emotional description of the characters. Your writing style is really not good, and it will delay your novel.
It doesn't look good, it doesn't look good, it doesn't look good! ! ! ! Say important things three times!
I have read about twenty chapters, and it feels like I was reading an online game novel more than ten years ago.
In the first chapter, I saw that the inner drama was so satisfying that it didn't feel like time travel at all, so I didn't want to read it.
It's been a long time since I've seen a novel protagonist with two names. Wu's name is in his previous life, and his name in this life is Maas. I didn't even feel that I could relate to it.
I just read the previous 20 chapters. To be honest, I feel that I need both, including bows, arrows, swords, and staffs. The key is not to provide space for arrangement. Normally, the image of an archer is not only a quiver on the back, a bow and arrow in the hand, but also a dagger hanging on the waist. And some details are not well connected. For example, you don't even tell your teacher that you want the equipment, and you get it inexplicably.
It doesn't look like something for adults.
The writing is quite natural, the storyline is not contrived, it is the writing style of an experienced author.
It's so good, the author quickly started coding
The part about rescuing his teacher is too unrealistic. Just risk your own life. Those adventurers will also risk their lives with you. Are you serious?
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Updating... Grass Recommended: 4.4 Refreshing feeling: 3 Kill: 6.7 Notre Dame: 6.5 Black belly: 2 Depth: 4 Extras: None Tags: time travel, game, fantasy, golden finger Introduction: A time-travel, world-viewing game-type Western fantasy novel What you should probably watch: Pseudo-game novels that are tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Detailed introduction: Traveling through a different world, like a different world in a game. The golden finger is open but not open. Basically, after reading it, I still feel unclear. Attributes, professions, skills, monsters, and equipment columns are all in the clouds, like a running account. . .
It's almost finished. The story and setting are quite interesting, but it's a pity that the author's storytelling skills are a bit poor.
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