If You Start with a Bow, Your Equipment Will Become Stronger

The protagonist's ability to portray the character is too poor, and he prefers to cut out the characterization, portraying the protagonist as a dull idiot, who does not seem to have traveled from modern society at all. Mrs. Mei Li, a superfluous character, should not have been written at all. Judging from the author's setting background of the novel, the use of Goldfinger, and the main plot of the novel. They are all pretty good, and I can read a little more if I bite the bullet. I hope the author will not get too involved in the characterization and emotional description of the characters. Your writing style is really not good, and it will delay your novel.

It doesn't look good, it doesn't look good, it doesn't look good! ! ! ! Say important things three times!

I have read about twenty chapters, and it feels like I was reading an online game novel more than ten years ago.

In the first chapter, I saw that the inner drama was so satisfying that it didn't feel like time travel at all, so I didn't want to read it.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel protagonist with two names. Wu's name is in his previous life, and his name in this life is Maas. I didn't even feel that I could relate to it.

I just read the previous 20 chapters. To be honest, I feel that I need both, including bows, arrows, swords, and staffs. The key is not to provide space for arrangement. Normally, the image of an archer is not only a quiver on the back, a bow and arrow in the hand, but also a dagger hanging on the waist. And some details are not well connected. For example, you don't even tell your teacher that you want the equipment, and you get it inexplicably.

It doesn't look like something for adults.

The writing is quite natural, the storyline is not contrived, it is the writing style of an experienced author.

It's so good, the author quickly started coding

As a modern person, I don't understand the situation of ancient nobility at all. It's too abstract to get enthusiastic when seeing bad people. Either you don't socialize, or you do things so that others don't know it's you. If you don't have the strength to meddle in others' own affairs, it's purely harmful to others and yourself. It's just reasonable to do these things if you directly set yourself up as a poor person who has been oppressed. Otherwise, those aristocratic masters will be defeated by you, which of your friends will have any good fruits? You have the confidence to act cool. What will your friend do? If you weren't the protagonist, your friend would have died countless times.