
Devouring the Stars
by Luo Cry
About This Novel
Forge your body from the devouring starry sky, and transcend your will in the transformation of stars! Cao Bing: "For thousands of years, the stars are at my will, and the truth and emptiness are at my will."
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Official(124)Scraped 13d ago
Two worlds, two bodies, one person, this is ridiculous
Although the difference in martial arts levels between the two worlds is a bit big, the author shouldn't do it like this. It's very messy. It's like writing two novels. One has reached the peak, and the other has started to practice again.
Solemn explanation
I solemnly state that the author has not brushed up his scores, nor does he need to brush up his scores, nor is he interested in brushing up his scores. The author's grades are whatever they are. Thank you for your support! Thanks!
The writing is okay, but the protagonist has too many social activities. There are people the protagonist knows wherever he goes. Luo Feng and Luo Feng are good brothers in the main world, and Qin Yu is good brothers in the world traveled through. . . If you don't practice martial arts properly, you'll do these crooked things all day long.
Ahem, I just started watching it.
I have a little doubt. Doesn't the author know that Meteor Tears was given to Qin Yu by the God King? Don't you have enough life that you keep trying to snatch away? Although I'm not sure if he's the boss of the God King, he's just the boss. When I look at it, I don't know that the author has never read the original work, yet he is writing a fanfic.
I keep kneeling and licking Luo Feng, why do you want the protagonist to do it? Isn't it better to just read the original work?
It's not a pity to throw away the food if it's tasteless, it's worse than chicken ribs
A person who has traveled through the earth shows no signs of disgust with the little devil? This makes it difficult for me to imagine what kind of person the author is. Abandoned
At first I thought the writing method was quite novel, but then I started complaining feebly.
The two worlds are completely mixed together. Be clear-headed. The author's writing style really cannot highlight the plots of the two worlds.
He licks the protagonist so much that he doesn't seize the opportunity
You traveled back in time just to make green leaves for the protagonist. Luo Feng won't say anything. When I first saw the technique that was given to Qin Yu, I thought it was to prevent him from practicing the Heavenly Map. Good guy, but it turned out that it gave him a chance just to let him practice star transformation. He licked it hard. If you practice it yourself, you are stronger than him and robbed the Meteor Tears. Isn't it delicious? It's true that you are strong and have a good relationship with the protagonist. You will also die.
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Community(0)
Official(124)Scraped 13d ago
Two worlds, two bodies, one person, this is ridiculous
Although the difference in martial arts levels between the two worlds is a bit big, the author shouldn't do it like this. It's very messy. It's like writing two novels. One has reached the peak, and the other has started to practice again.
Solemn explanation
I solemnly state that the author has not brushed up his scores, nor does he need to brush up his scores, nor is he interested in brushing up his scores. The author's grades are whatever they are. Thank you for your support! Thanks!
The writing is okay, but the protagonist has too many social activities. There are people the protagonist knows wherever he goes. Luo Feng and Luo Feng are good brothers in the main world, and Qin Yu is good brothers in the world traveled through. . . If you don't practice martial arts properly, you'll do these crooked things all day long.
Ahem, I just started watching it.
I have a little doubt. Doesn't the author know that Meteor Tears was given to Qin Yu by the God King? Don't you have enough life that you keep trying to snatch away? Although I'm not sure if he's the boss of the God King, he's just the boss. When I look at it, I don't know that the author has never read the original work, yet he is writing a fanfic.
I keep kneeling and licking Luo Feng, why do you want the protagonist to do it? Isn't it better to just read the original work?
It's not a pity to throw away the food if it's tasteless, it's worse than chicken ribs
A person who has traveled through the earth shows no signs of disgust with the little devil? This makes it difficult for me to imagine what kind of person the author is. Abandoned
At first I thought the writing method was quite novel, but then I started complaining feebly.
The two worlds are completely mixed together. Be clear-headed. The author's writing style really cannot highlight the plots of the two worlds.
He licks the protagonist so much that he doesn't seize the opportunity
You traveled back in time just to make green leaves for the protagonist. Luo Feng won't say anything. When I first saw the technique that was given to Qin Yu, I thought it was to prevent him from practicing the Heavenly Map. Good guy, but it turned out that it gave him a chance just to let him practice star transformation. He licked it hard. If you practice it yourself, you are stronger than him and robbed the Meteor Tears. Isn't it delicious? It's true that you are strong and have a good relationship with the protagonist. You will also die.










