Ask About the World of Martial Arts

I have read this book from beginning to end. It is a charming book, but unfortunately it has quite a few poisonous points! But it can still be seen. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: First, if you practice for three generations, you will not be able to become an immortal, which is a big poison. The World of Swordsman is where the protagonist lays the foundation. From having no experience in spiritual practice, to harvesting the spiritual resources of a lifetime of spiritual practice, he has a path to overcome confusion. Although he dies unexpectedly in the end, it is understandable that after harvesting the spiritual resources of one life, he can pave a smooth road for the next life. The World of the Divine Condor seizes the bodies of children who died due to serious injuries in the war. As a result, in the end, the martial arts reached its peak, but the vitality was damaged in childhood and was unable to go further. The protagonist understood the right direction of immortality in the first life of Shendiao, but he could not achieve it. He was a bit suspicious, but he could bear it. He forcibly formed elixirs and died in this life. He should have achieved immortality in the next life! In the world of Tianlong, the protagonist gathered his training experience in the previous two lives and brought with him the golden elixir he learned in the previous life, but in the end he did not become an immortal! He will also be forced to reincarnate! The reason? It turned out that in order to fight for world supremacy, he fell in love with Wang Yuyan, sharing his energy and delaying his cultivation, and as a result, he had to be reincarnated. Fuck, author, you are openly feeding me, and you have no scruples! In Swordsman World and Qu Feiyan got married, in Divine Condor World and Li Mochou, and in Tianlong World, the author himself made it clear that he wanted the protagonist to concentrate on his path, but in the end he went to fight for hegemony in the world, and got together with Wang Yuyan and Abi? Didn't women have enough fun in the first two lives? In your third life, you have already said you should focus on the path, but you still do this? Author, can't you let the protagonist control his little muscle tyrant? Second, the layout of the novel is not good. There are always long paragraphs of text, which is very difficult to read, but considering that it is an old book, it is barely understandable. Third, no matter how the protagonist participates in the development of the plot, in the end the author makes the plot return to the original work, which is a bit poisonous! Smiling Proudly in the World, Linghu Chong learned the Zixia Magic Kung Fu, the Nine Yin Manual, and most of the magical techniques created by the protagonist. In the end, he was severely injured by a minion like the original work. Even if the author explained it, even if he made it up and said that Linghu Chong was drunk and was seriously injured in a sneak attack, the result was not round, he was forcibly injured, and the logic collapsed. In the world of the divine eagle, the protagonist opens the Nanliang treasure in the "Liancheng Jue" in later generations, and sends it to Guo Jing to train his troops to fight against the Jin Dynasty. However, Xiangyang is still destroyed, so what is the significance of the protagonist opening the treasure? Water plot? In the world of Tianlong, since the protagonist has clearly understood the path to becoming an immortal, he should concentrate on practicing and attain enlightenment as soon as possible. However, in the end, he still has to follow the plot. In the end, he has to conquer the world for Murong Fuguo and fall in love with his cousin. He deliberately feeds 💩, it is really poisonous! Fourth, an outline ending, adding poison to poison! Talking about the advantages: Part of the plot is quite charming. Although the martial arts style is a bit weak, it still has the spirit of walking alone, diligently pursuing the truth, and being enterprising. Unfortunately, it was deliberately fed up by the author and ended unfinished. To sum up, this book is not a fairy grass, it is not a grain, and of course it is not completely a poisonous weed. It can be regarded as a moldy grain. It is readable, but it is a very selective reader! The entry requirement for reading this book is that you must have high poison resistance and at least half a level of Shen Nong's body, otherwise you will be poisoned and die!

Pig's trotters are so awesome when practicing, but they are so bad at fighting. I couldn't help but greet the author's family, and then gave up. ........................

Just rubbish.

Half of a book is about introducing various martial arts moves. Basically, one kind of martial arts requires several chapters. Are you trying to cheat on the word count?

Linghu Chong Zixia practiced Nine Yin Yi Jing Bone Forging, Yi Jing Twelve, Dugu Nine Swords, but he was still deliberately injured by a palm, Peach Valley Six Immortals and Six Strands of Qi, and he also deliberately asked Linghu Chong to learn the Incomplete Star Absorbing Technique. After practicing Zixia, Jiuyin, and Nine Swords, it's still the original work. I'm really speechless.

I've read Chapter 11, and I won't go into too much nonsense! Why am I feeling dizzy! It doesn't feel like reading a novel at all! Hey, I'm gone, I won't watch anymore!

The protagonist is a good guy who doesn't know how to hide his secrets

Many people look down on Yue Buqun, saying that he is a hypocrite. In my opinion, are there any gentlemen in today's society? Aren't they all hypocrites, one is one at home and another outside, all living under a mask?

I thought it was the Swordsman of the Swordsman, hey!

The writing is average, the narrative is more than ten times more than the story, it's too watery