People Are in the Heavens, Parasitic and Born in the Tao

A tacky, crappy book Do you still remember the title of your book? After arriving in the perfect world, I will act as a nanny and act cool all the time. I thought it was some new idea As a result, after arriving in the perfect world, his body was transformed, and he still used Han Li's face? Parasitic? You've parasitized a yarn! Jumping up and down in the lower realm, even saving the gourd vines in Butian Pavilion Also known as Han Tianzun? Do you remember what you are? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head In short, it's just a crazy show-off to defeat the Pu Demon King! Flip the reincarnation disk! The power of the upper realm that conquered the lower realm, conquered the Five Elements Mountain He licked Liu Shen, licked No. 10, Licked Xiaota, and why did he lick Kunpengzi? Rescue him from the Five Elements Mountain, and then use the ten evil methods to exchange with Kun Pengzi to cultivate the primary and secondary body methods? Still claiming that this thing is not weaker than the Immortal King's method? Does Kunpengzi know that he is so cruel? Then in the perfect world, throw the clone into Zhetian! Bad book, read with caution

Mortal's writing is too empty. I finished writing Mortal in just 76 pages. Han Li was written as if he was far away from me, and he was just a tool. Later, the perfect world became No. 10'S daddy again. Even passers-by like Butian Teng, who had no connection or even met before, had to save, and mutated into the Virgin. Aren't you the same template as Huangta? Not interesting Looking at the catalog later, there are other things about "turning into an immortal in one's own body". What age are you still playing the clone style in Zhutianwen? Is there anyone in your world who writes about Yang Tiandi so wonderfully?

I don't know why, but it's very well written. You're really boring. You're just following others the whole time, and you basically have no idea of ​​independent action.

Mortals are good-looking, but perfection is meaningless.

It's really poisonous, the nanny and the brainless routine, the protagonist is a complete bastard, the original protagonists of all the worlds are like fools, and all the characters in the book combined don't have half a pound of brains.

The protagonist is quite scheming, but not particularly bad. There are two locations, but they are both operated by normal people and there are no obstacles, and the plot development is okay. But there is one thing that the author has said many times and the author has never changed it. Han Li didn't know about the Xuantian Treasure when he was in the human world.

Can you read it again before posting? There are so many typos, multiple words, and the order is reversed. There are several places in one picture. How many problems can there be in over a hundred pictures?

Not going to cover the sky? Jumping straight to perfection?

The first part is okay, but the later parts are like the author has been changed. I can't read them at all.

The protagonist is about to become an immortal, can the heavens write about it?