
Creation Starting from Covering the Sky
About This Novel
"Empress, you have passed." An illusory giant hand containing the monstrous breath of creation came out from the depths of the ancient star of creation. The giant hand slapped the empress in white and was driven into the depths of the starry sky. (Chapter 8 ~ Chapter 9 are slightly toxic and can be skipped) Join the group, qq:1074395102
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Official(83)Scraped 1mo ago
Not pretty!
I read a few of them, they are so ridiculous! The character dialogue in the first few pictures is a bit weird, a bit Western character dialogue style! Moreover, the author's writing is a bit confusing. I can't tell who the protagonist is! The most speechless thing is that the ruthless emperor who has not yet become an immortal can fight against the enemy across a universe. What else does the author say about a quasi-immortal emperor? The time is simply wrong. Even a quasi-immortal emperor can span parallel universes? The quasi-immortal emperor will be in trouble in this universe for a long time!
I'm stuck, so I'll stop updating for a while.
Uh⊙∀⊙! I got stuck, so I stopped updating for a while, about a month.
The author's shortcomings [I hope the author will reply]
I can also talk to the author here. In fact, when I saw dozens of pictures, I almost wanted to leave. In fact, the author should consider more, why many people say that the author is too vicious, firstly, he is ruthless, and secondly, I think the emperor's son in the supergod world destroys the country and kills people. The supergod universe is very similar to the real world. As long as you think about it afterwards, you will feel that you have also killed the Chinese people. In this year of the epidemic, it will be more prominent among the Chinese outside the country. The author should pay more attention to details. For example, first destroy an island country, then destroy the Eight-Nation Alliance, then attack India and then attack the United States.
About progress
I don't know if readers like fast pace or slow pace. If you have any comments, please leave a reply in this comment.
It makes no sense, it's a mess, what are you writing about?
A book that covers the sky but does not lick cruel people is a good book with five stars.
The most annoying thing is that he always thinks about kneeling down and licking ruthless people. Nine times out of ten colleagues will mention his brother in front of ruthless people. How can ruthless people and Ye Fan ignore others if they don't say a few words? Is it called the Forbidden Land for nothing? Except for Ye Fan, those who are not as good as the emperor are like entering the ancient forbidden land, where they will die and not live.
What is this book about? Bullshit
Even if you want to edit it, at least follow the original work or have some logic? And now, is the Holy Emperor of Creation the protagonist or the ruthless man is the protagonist? You haven't written it clearly. If the ruthless man is the protagonist, the Holy Emperor of Creation is not a person from Zhetian Universe. According to what you wrote, he is a native of Zhetian Universe and has no concept of the world. I hope you can rationalize your thoughts before writing.
This book is okay, but a bit messy
Unlike other books, when writing about Zhe Tian, she doesn't always kneel down and lick the ruthless people, otherwise she will be all kinds of pitiful and ruthless people who think she is something. There are many such people. It's so disgusting to fall in love with ruthless people at every turn. This book does not kneel down and lick, just stick to your own way, this is the protagonist
Should I say boring, or should I say boring?
Chapter 98 was blocked, and then, it took more than 12 hours for him to block it. The system couldn't be that slow, so only people reported it.
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Community(0)
Official(83)Scraped 1mo ago
Not pretty!
I read a few of them, they are so ridiculous! The character dialogue in the first few pictures is a bit weird, a bit Western character dialogue style! Moreover, the author's writing is a bit confusing. I can't tell who the protagonist is! The most speechless thing is that the ruthless emperor who has not yet become an immortal can fight against the enemy across a universe. What else does the author say about a quasi-immortal emperor? The time is simply wrong. Even a quasi-immortal emperor can span parallel universes? The quasi-immortal emperor will be in trouble in this universe for a long time!
I'm stuck, so I'll stop updating for a while.
Uh⊙∀⊙! I got stuck, so I stopped updating for a while, about a month.
The author's shortcomings [I hope the author will reply]
I can also talk to the author here. In fact, when I saw dozens of pictures, I almost wanted to leave. In fact, the author should consider more, why many people say that the author is too vicious, firstly, he is ruthless, and secondly, I think the emperor's son in the supergod world destroys the country and kills people. The supergod universe is very similar to the real world. As long as you think about it afterwards, you will feel that you have also killed the Chinese people. In this year of the epidemic, it will be more prominent among the Chinese outside the country. The author should pay more attention to details. For example, first destroy an island country, then destroy the Eight-Nation Alliance, then attack India and then attack the United States.
About progress
I don't know if readers like fast pace or slow pace. If you have any comments, please leave a reply in this comment.
It makes no sense, it's a mess, what are you writing about?
A book that covers the sky but does not lick cruel people is a good book with five stars.
The most annoying thing is that he always thinks about kneeling down and licking ruthless people. Nine times out of ten colleagues will mention his brother in front of ruthless people. How can ruthless people and Ye Fan ignore others if they don't say a few words? Is it called the Forbidden Land for nothing? Except for Ye Fan, those who are not as good as the emperor are like entering the ancient forbidden land, where they will die and not live.
What is this book about? Bullshit
Even if you want to edit it, at least follow the original work or have some logic? And now, is the Holy Emperor of Creation the protagonist or the ruthless man is the protagonist? You haven't written it clearly. If the ruthless man is the protagonist, the Holy Emperor of Creation is not a person from Zhetian Universe. According to what you wrote, he is a native of Zhetian Universe and has no concept of the world. I hope you can rationalize your thoughts before writing.
This book is okay, but a bit messy
Unlike other books, when writing about Zhe Tian, she doesn't always kneel down and lick the ruthless people, otherwise she will be all kinds of pitiful and ruthless people who think she is something. There are many such people. It's so disgusting to fall in love with ruthless people at every turn. This book does not kneel down and lick, just stick to your own way, this is the protagonist
Should I say boring, or should I say boring?
Chapter 98 was blocked, and then, it took more than 12 hours for him to block it. The system couldn't be that slow, so only people reported it.











