Perfect World: Immortal Ancient Little Fairy King

Author, I would like to give you some advice. If you include more female protagonists, then this book will be perfect. If you see my comment, can you reply to it? Are there multiple heroines?

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The pace is too slow. It's almost 200 chapters and we haven't even reached the Supreme. As long as the timeline is advanced or starts from the ancient times, I won't say anything. The two worlds are fighting, and this little fight is still here. To be honest, I didn't see any nervousness in the protagonist except at the beginning.

Author, the method you created is so-so, has no advantages and is very awkward. First of all, the ancient method emphasizes the harmony between Tao and me. The shortcomings are that the upper limit is low and the limit is low. The Tao species determines what realm you can reach. If the lower limit is low, there is a guaranteed state. With the body species, the upper limit is low and the upper limit is high. The upper limit is low because it is difficult to reach the fairyland with full combat power. Breakthrough, but in the fairyland, the combat power is terrifying, the lower limit is high, everyone can practice normally, have resources to upgrade, and have strong adaptability to the environment. As for yours, it is simply hard to explain. The flesh and spirit are divided, and the flesh and spirit nourish the qi. You have trained yourself to level 3. There is no connection at all. Are you playing the magic of decomposing the devil? Whether it is traditional or 3-part, both are based on refining Qi and practicing Shen. Have you ever thought about why? Or have you ever read any medical knowledge? The body is the foundation, and only when the body is good and the energy is sufficient can the spirit be sustained. Let's take a look at your creative methods. Each one has his own way. You can write about using blood and energy to drive the spirit or using energy to control the body. I think it's okay. After all, it has the flavor of a system. Cultivation is about systems, and it is never a single thing. Dharma, a single Dharma is called a way to protect the way, not the root of life. The name of the created Dharma is also ugly. It is called Bone Zang... In martial arts, there is this thing called the Three Zangs of Jingqi Shen. They are the ones who store the essence of Qi Zang Shen. In tradition, they are called Sanhua and Dragon Bones. , 24 Qi knot, you are looking at your name, which is as old-fashioned as a primary school student. My suggestion is that if you don't have that writing style, don't innovate. If you look uneducated, you are still old-fashioned. If you want to have inner world, start with blood. Practice blood 9 times and open the human body with blood. The 360 acupoints are connected to the cave and sky, and the bones are used as supports to support the heaven and the earth. The 5 Tibetans are transformed into 5 lines, 6 mansions are transformed into 6 reincarnations. The nose, ears, eyes and mouth are transformed into 4 o'clock Qi knots. The 4 o'clock in the cave is connected to the sky and the earth, and the bridge is transformed into a small world. I don't want to go into details later, just study it slowly by yourself.

The Witch and Liu Shen want to accept Gao as one of the female protagonists. You definitely can't contain Liu Shen in the front, but when you get stronger later, you should contain Shen Shu.

OK OK, the author can do it, but I still can't feel the invincibility of the protagonist yet, and I still hope to have more female protagonists

Come on, come on, come on and update. Come on

Don't lick Shi Hao. Just grab what you need. The heroine just needs to leave one Huo Ling'er for him, and grab the rest if they should.

Well, don't leave a girl to Shi Hao, and then take that Liu Shen away. Then don't be a nanny for Shi Hao. Then this is a good book for you. Anyway, it's a new book, and it doesn't have too many words. Some regrets should be made up for when they should be made up for, and some women should be accepted when they should be accepted.

I hope there won't be any ambiguity even if there's no heroine. If you have to have a woman, just make it a mortal, and be a mortal couple for the rest of your life, and don't mess around with anything else.