
Heavenly Deliverance: from Apprentice to Lord
About This Novel
With heavenly salvation as the background, it narrates Eric's experience from apprentice to lord. This book focuses on logic and plot design, and strives to create a real world. Readers' corrections are welcome.
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
The writing is good and delicate, the style is good, the pace is slow, and the characters serve the plot, which is great. The biggest problem is that the world view of Kingdom of Heaven and Salvation itself is based on the historical Bohemia of the 14th century. These people, including Raddi Capone Haynes, are real people in history, and their families also exist. The author obviously does not understand the history of that era. Take the economy as an example. At the same time, the annual income of a senior armorer was about 2,000-4,000 groschen, the annual income of ordinary employees was only about 200-400, and the annual income of a guard was about 500-600, and just one meal cost 500 groschen. This is really unreasonable, and the economy collapsed badly. Moreover, Groschen itself contained silver and was the only official currency in Bohemia at that time. There was no gold and silver exchange. The story can be fictional, but if you want to write about heavenly salvation, which is a historical background, it is better to know more about the historical background and economic common sense at that time.
Is there a heroine in this book, Teresa?
Too oriental
I kept reading patiently and couldn't stand it when I read that it was a serious crime to possess armor privately. The protagonist's first consumer reaction after getting the money was to eat, drink and have fun. Isn't it to buy weapons and armor and put them into reproduction? In the end, it felt like becoming a lord was far away.
Is this a time travel or a local?
Is this a time travel or a local? Find out more about liking each other
It's a pity that medieval history is still too niche, otherwise the results would be better.
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
The writing is good and delicate, the style is good, the pace is slow, and the characters serve the plot, which is great. The biggest problem is that the world view of Kingdom of Heaven and Salvation itself is based on the historical Bohemia of the 14th century. These people, including Raddi Capone Haynes, are real people in history, and their families also exist. The author obviously does not understand the history of that era. Take the economy as an example. At the same time, the annual income of a senior armorer was about 2,000-4,000 groschen, the annual income of ordinary employees was only about 200-400, and the annual income of a guard was about 500-600, and just one meal cost 500 groschen. This is really unreasonable, and the economy collapsed badly. Moreover, Groschen itself contained silver and was the only official currency in Bohemia at that time. There was no gold and silver exchange. The story can be fictional, but if you want to write about heavenly salvation, which is a historical background, it is better to know more about the historical background and economic common sense at that time.
Is there a heroine in this book, Teresa?
Too oriental
I kept reading patiently and couldn't stand it when I read that it was a serious crime to possess armor privately. The protagonist's first consumer reaction after getting the money was to eat, drink and have fun. Isn't it to buy weapons and armor and put them into reproduction? In the end, it felt like becoming a lord was far away.
Is this a time travel or a local?
Is this a time travel or a local? Find out more about liking each other
It's a pity that medieval history is still too niche, otherwise the results would be better.









