Good Luck to All Heavens

I can only say that the author is awesome. He has only written more than 800,000 words in total, and 99.99% Of them are about The World of Red Mansions. The first three pictures look okay, at least the writing is okay. But I really don't understand the structure of your story. Did the author not write an outline? Or are you planning to write eight to nine million words? Otherwise, you would have written more than 800,000 words for the world of Red Mansions. If you travel to several more worlds in the future, how can you expand it without a few million words? I'm drunk too! What a waste of writing and creativity!

Xiaosheng Qianjian, there are two main reasons why book friends are dissatisfied: First, it has the name of Zhutian, but in the Red Mansion World, it has already obtained the knowledge and other resources of the Hunlord World. At present, it seems that it has the name of Zhutian but not the reality of Zhutian, which is very uncomfortable and uncomfortable. Second, the character of the protagonist is a bit stubborn, which is different from the open and happy Shuangwen. It will be very uncomfortable. I was not used to it at first, but when I think about the abusive protagonist more than ten years ago, this stubbornness is nothing to worry about. What I like most now is reading everyone's book reviews, which is very interesting. At present, the protagonist's economic management ability is more useful than his combat power. The author seems to be looking for his own coordination and style in structuring farming and combat stories. I hope everyone can give the author more encouragement and kind words. Finally, it is recommended to build some new specialties in the hinterland of the Snowy Mountains, and at the same time have some war scenes to turn barbarians into people and educate one side! Further plowing in the direction of farming. Zhutian, I guess you need to open a big map to use it. The current map has more than enough abilities for the protagonist. Do you dare to take away all the main forces of the manor! 😑

The first two or three chapters are still about the main world, but in the later chapters you write about the Red Mansion. I have always seen about 100 pictures, all about the Red Mansion. You can write hundreds of pictures in one world and it can be long and understandable, but the Red Mansion is so painful that it makes me want to vomit. One more thing, what is your need to enter this world? Why are you here in the Red Mansion? Write books, make money, and then kneel down and lick the old lady in various ways. I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I scrolled down a bit, and I didn't know which chapter was the end. Forget it, I just stopped reading. Goodbye.

Like Sun Tzu in Red Mansion, Water Margin is still like this, all the subordinates dare to jump, their IQs are still low, they are divided and used as a logistics base, and others are given whatever they ask for. In reality, they are also suppressed to death, and they are so useless that they have no use for golden fingers.

Well, there are more than 3,000 chapters from the martial arts world of time travel, and then there is Vegeta, and a book with more than 1,200 chapters, and in total, there are more than 3,000 chapters from the first martial arts world of time travel, and after finishing it without finishing a word, it is still very good. The author's writing style😘😘😘😘😘 I hope to work hard first, and then what? There are recommendation tickets, and then there will be monthly tickets, and then there will also be tickets, so I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on, and improve his writing and style by the way. Time Travel and Zhutianliu are still very good^ω^ The author is still a big brother in this aspect Kang Yue and Zhu Tianming are pretty good

The first world is Red Mansions. After reading dozens of chapters, it doesn't matter, but after looking at the table of contents, I think it's crazy⊙∀⊙! I've written nearly two hundred chapters of "A Red Mansion" and you still feel so aggrieved when you write it.

The protagonist's martial arts skills are useless. The male protagonist is weak and can be bullied in the main world and the world he traveled to. No matter how others bully him, he will only suffer silently and never fight back.

I came here to see the flow of all the worlds, not to see the grandson in Dream of Red Mansions pretending to be a prostitute! Selling dog meat for sale!

The protagonist's kung fu is so strong, why don't we just fuck the old lady and send her to her death? Still have to wait? So troublesome? The same goes for Mrs. Wang. Wouldn't it be nice to give her a break? Why practice martial arts? In my opinion, it is just to have the strength to overturn the chess game. If you directly attack the old lady and Mrs. Wang, won't there be dragons like a sea in the future? Why else would you practice martial arts? Isn't martial arts just for killing those people you don't like?

The author's writing skills are very solid, but he has a masochistic tendency. The protagonist in the main world and the dungeon is wronged and does not resist.