Holy Lord Kaido in One Piece
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"The demons and ghosts leave quickly... The demons and ghosts leave quickly..." "No! Dad, you can't do this to me!" "Holy Lord, you are the only one who will never let you go. Go back to the hell where you belong!" "Jackie Chan, Uncle Long~ Let me go. I don't want to go back to hell. I can give you all the treasures and treasures~" "Holy Lord, I once believed in you so much, but I didn't expect you to do such a thing. I will never let you go!" "No, no, no, Dad, Uncle Long, I can't go to hell. What will Xiaoyu do when I'm gone?" "Monsters and ghosts, leave quickly!! Monsters, ghosts and ghosts, leave quickly! Monsters, ghosts and ghosts..." *N (getting louder and faster) "Holy Lord, you actually have the nerve to mention Xiaoyu and go back to Pangu Hell. This time, you will never come out again!" "No!!! Dad, Jackie Chan, I will come back..." ---- "Huh, I'll give you a banana back! Isn't the world of One Piece not good enough? You actually want to go back to the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures!"
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Official(20)Scraped 1mo ago
The subject matter is good, but the setting is a bit bad! Just because the Holy Lord is a dragon, you can't convert him into Kaido! Even if you re-create a character, grab twelve talismans, travel to the world of pirates, and then unlock the power of the twelve talismans based on bounty or participation in major events, I think it will be much better than your writing (I remember there seems to be a pirate novel with this general setting that Wan said!) There is another point: his body is Kaido, and with the power of the Holy Lord (after eating the fish fruit, the blue dragon form), he is basically invincible! What did you write as a result? Anyone can fight with it, but they can't beat it, and they can't kill the opponent! Then it means: It still takes time to recover! Quite speechless! (In my personal opinion! The protagonist has invincible strength! At most, he will be invincible when Roger dies! Then the world will be unified, and that will be the finale) Actually, there is another point, but I don't think it matters, but other people may think it's a bit 🤢! It's about the protagonist and Charlotte Lingling! Especially Charlotte Lingling, after having more than a dozen children, she still wrote about it so... It should be said that it was a joke! The plot of Kaido in your book is no different from the original work. The devil fruits were all given by Charlotte Lingling! But you have to be clear about one thing! You are the Holy Lord. Although you are another consciousness occupying the Holy Lord's body and memory, you cannot be as dark as the Holy Lord, but you will be affected, right? You can't possibly say that you yearn for darkness in your heart, but then you still have a little bit of light left? ? ? 😂
After so many chapters, I don't need to read anymore. He has the strength and power to crush everything and yet he still licks Straw Hat Luffy's ass. It's disgusting.
What is written is really poisonous, but doesn't the Holy Lord kill randomly in the pirate world? It also deliberately suppresses the combat power, unlike Jackie Chan's Adventures which has the rules of yin and yang balance. Also, shouldn't the Holy Master directly refine the talisman and deliberately let his power exist in the form of a talisman? What you wrote is really poisonous.
The author, writing about battles is really too exaggerated, and his writing style is just like that.
I suggest you read Farmer's book on One Punch. He writes about one of the best in combat, and Kaido's words, you have to punch to the core. You are too timid, and the style of Black Carbon Orochi is not suitable.
He keeps suppressing his fighting power, and his fucking strength is up and down. He listens to Lingling the most, and he seems to be Lingling's lackluster, like a fool.
You have to suppress the combat power, it's too poisonous, I suggest you don't read it, you have to give the charm to others before you can use it... The combat power is about the same as Capron Roger, but Roger almost seriously injured the protagonist with a knife...
You said it would be okay for Teacher Kai to get a Holy Lord Fruit. His meow Holy Master wears Teacher Kai. To be honest, I think Teacher Kai's original charm is higher. Holy Lord, the reason why Holy Lord is popular is not that he was too unexplainable in his heyday. 12 Spells. Ryuga, a demon wizard with magical memories. It's so incomprehensible.
I bought it. The quality of the underwear is very good. The merchant came to install it personally. The service is really good. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washing. Children especially like to eat it and the elderly can also use it. It is very loose and does not pill at all. It is also very clean when washed. Children like it very much. Eat, there is no pressure on sensitive skin. The grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums. I add a few drops every time I cook. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The underwear is of very good quality. It is so easy to use. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth. It does not stick to the pan when washing. I will buy this underwear again in the future.
Shakou, see for yourself whether Chapter 9 or Chapter 10 is poisonous.
generally
The author shows his brain very well, letting users know how stupid people can be
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Official(20)Scraped 1mo ago
The subject matter is good, but the setting is a bit bad! Just because the Holy Lord is a dragon, you can't convert him into Kaido! Even if you re-create a character, grab twelve talismans, travel to the world of pirates, and then unlock the power of the twelve talismans based on bounty or participation in major events, I think it will be much better than your writing (I remember there seems to be a pirate novel with this general setting that Wan said!) There is another point: his body is Kaido, and with the power of the Holy Lord (after eating the fish fruit, the blue dragon form), he is basically invincible! What did you write as a result? Anyone can fight with it, but they can't beat it, and they can't kill the opponent! Then it means: It still takes time to recover! Quite speechless! (In my personal opinion! The protagonist has invincible strength! At most, he will be invincible when Roger dies! Then the world will be unified, and that will be the finale) Actually, there is another point, but I don't think it matters, but other people may think it's a bit 🤢! It's about the protagonist and Charlotte Lingling! Especially Charlotte Lingling, after having more than a dozen children, she still wrote about it so... It should be said that it was a joke! The plot of Kaido in your book is no different from the original work. The devil fruits were all given by Charlotte Lingling! But you have to be clear about one thing! You are the Holy Lord. Although you are another consciousness occupying the Holy Lord's body and memory, you cannot be as dark as the Holy Lord, but you will be affected, right? You can't possibly say that you yearn for darkness in your heart, but then you still have a little bit of light left? ? ? 😂
After so many chapters, I don't need to read anymore. He has the strength and power to crush everything and yet he still licks Straw Hat Luffy's ass. It's disgusting.
What is written is really poisonous, but doesn't the Holy Lord kill randomly in the pirate world? It also deliberately suppresses the combat power, unlike Jackie Chan's Adventures which has the rules of yin and yang balance. Also, shouldn't the Holy Master directly refine the talisman and deliberately let his power exist in the form of a talisman? What you wrote is really poisonous.
The author, writing about battles is really too exaggerated, and his writing style is just like that.
I suggest you read Farmer's book on One Punch. He writes about one of the best in combat, and Kaido's words, you have to punch to the core. You are too timid, and the style of Black Carbon Orochi is not suitable.
He keeps suppressing his fighting power, and his fucking strength is up and down. He listens to Lingling the most, and he seems to be Lingling's lackluster, like a fool.
You have to suppress the combat power, it's too poisonous, I suggest you don't read it, you have to give the charm to others before you can use it... The combat power is about the same as Capron Roger, but Roger almost seriously injured the protagonist with a knife...
You said it would be okay for Teacher Kai to get a Holy Lord Fruit. His meow Holy Master wears Teacher Kai. To be honest, I think Teacher Kai's original charm is higher. Holy Lord, the reason why Holy Lord is popular is not that he was too unexplainable in his heyday. 12 Spells. Ryuga, a demon wizard with magical memories. It's so incomprehensible.
I bought it. The quality of the underwear is very good. The merchant came to install it personally. The service is really good. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washing. Children especially like to eat it and the elderly can also use it. It is very loose and does not pill at all. It is also very clean when washed. Children like it very much. Eat, there is no pressure on sensitive skin. The grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums. I add a few drops every time I cook. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The underwear is of very good quality. It is so easy to use. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth. It does not stick to the pan when washing. I will buy this underwear again in the future.
Shakou, see for yourself whether Chapter 9 or Chapter 10 is poisonous.
generally
The author shows his brain very well, letting users know how stupid people can be
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