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The new book "Douluo: Many Children and Many Blessings Begin from Yunyun" has been released, and it is a free book forever! Traveling through the Douluo Continent, he obtained the heaven-defying system and received a titled Douluo-level beauty at the beginning, so Ye Qin decided to start his own legendary journey in the Douluo Continent. What a legendary life this is...
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Official(353)Scraped 20d ago
There are many heroines, A Yin, Bo Saixi, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Shui Bing'er, Brigitte, Gu Yuena, Tang Yuehua, etc. These are all classics. Please give your best to the author.
The imagination is okay, but the writing is not that good, and there is almost no emotional description.
Halfway through, I couldn't understand why all the heroines were together. Why did I like the protagonist? You have to say that the system likes it 100%. Whatever emotions you write are all done by the system. The key is that you have to write about the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. It's too embarrassing. It's a forced match. I suggest the author read more dog food articles to supplement the relationship aspect. Support the author to continue working hard.
Don't ask me who the heroine is
Four words: more, more, more, the better
I would like to express my opinion.
First, the so-called hardcore spoilers are meant to prevent people from thinking that the protagonist is a six-year-old child. Second, with Xiao Sheng, it's not that he is stupid, but that he has been treated as a waste since he was a child, which is a pathological or abnormal mentality in itself.
Test purity
Start a new book, old rules, test purity, 26 keys y m d
Long suite building
Come on and bring your own martial arts spirit! You can also create some beauties of your own, with their own martial arts spirits and personalities, I will delete them depending on the situation!
water
I have to say that the content of today's novels is becoming more and more routine. You can know the full content of the novel just by looking at the introduction. The quality is getting worse and worse, which is disappointing.
not good.
Already poisoned and dead, he met a woman and accepted a woman. And have you never seen a woman? Other than this, the rest of the content is pretty good.
The author must accept Xiao Wu.
Ning Rongrong can consider not accepting it. Xiao Wu must give it away. The images of Xiao Wu and the Shrek Seven Devils have changed again. Xiao Wu and Tang San had the biggest changes. Tang San felt as if he had become a beast. A bit of a sit down. Xiao Wu, please comment.
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Community(0)
Official(353)Scraped 20d ago
There are many heroines, A Yin, Bo Saixi, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Shui Bing'er, Brigitte, Gu Yuena, Tang Yuehua, etc. These are all classics. Please give your best to the author.
The imagination is okay, but the writing is not that good, and there is almost no emotional description.
Halfway through, I couldn't understand why all the heroines were together. Why did I like the protagonist? You have to say that the system likes it 100%. Whatever emotions you write are all done by the system. The key is that you have to write about the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. It's too embarrassing. It's a forced match. I suggest the author read more dog food articles to supplement the relationship aspect. Support the author to continue working hard.
Don't ask me who the heroine is
Four words: more, more, more, the better
I would like to express my opinion.
First, the so-called hardcore spoilers are meant to prevent people from thinking that the protagonist is a six-year-old child. Second, with Xiao Sheng, it's not that he is stupid, but that he has been treated as a waste since he was a child, which is a pathological or abnormal mentality in itself.
Test purity
Start a new book, old rules, test purity, 26 keys y m d
Long suite building
Come on and bring your own martial arts spirit! You can also create some beauties of your own, with their own martial arts spirits and personalities, I will delete them depending on the situation!
water
I have to say that the content of today's novels is becoming more and more routine. You can know the full content of the novel just by looking at the introduction. The quality is getting worse and worse, which is disappointing.
not good.
Already poisoned and dead, he met a woman and accepted a woman. And have you never seen a woman? Other than this, the rest of the content is pretty good.
The author must accept Xiao Wu.
Ning Rongrong can consider not accepting it. Xiao Wu must give it away. The images of Xiao Wu and the Shrek Seven Devils have changed again. Xiao Wu and Tang San had the biggest changes. Tang San felt as if he had become a beast. A bit of a sit down. Xiao Wu, please comment.
















