Witch Stop

Brother Rong has exhausted all his talents. This is the best story I have ever seen written by Brother Rong. Starting from high school, from the starting point to QQ, the characters and flavor are no longer the same as before.

I have been following new chapters until now. The problem I feel with the new book is that there are too few emotional scenes expressed, and there is also little communication with the female protagonists. When I was reading The Scholar and the Husband, basically every few chapters had dialogue and emotional warming with the female characters, but this book has much less. When I was writing, most of the content was about alchemy practice, and during this period I had conversations with the female characters. The dialogues are all skipped hastily. For example, after arriving at the new home, the dialogue with Zixuan is basically brushed off, or Zixuan's figure appears, but if the communication and interaction with Zixuan are not written, Zixuan basically becomes a background. In the last few chapters, Jiang Li still has lines, but Zixuan, who is accompanying Li Yu, has no lines. Do you understand? Marginalizing the love for the characters makes it very uncomfortable for readers like me who are chasing after Dazhou, Ruyi, and Xiaoyao. In short, I hope that Xiao Rong will remember to pay more attention to the emotional lines of the characters when writing about cultivation. It was originally a slow narrative, slow pace, and daily routine. As a result, the daily routine was full of overtime work, and there was no chance to chat with the family. Without the daily life of the family, it was putting the cart before the horse.

I couldn't bear to delete the photos of you in the photo album. At that time, I already thought that if one day I never see you again, at least I can still stare at those photos in a daze.

I have confirmed that I am not a ghostwriter. Please update quickly. Ten chapters a day, otherwise I will be left with stinky tofu eggs.

I beg the author to continue writing pretentious novels about memorizing poems through ancient times. I really beg. I have read them all from Xiaoyao, Ruyi, Dazhou, and Young Master. I really like them, especially the supporting role of Miss Chen San, a supporting role that I will never forget.

I think the biggest shortcoming of this book is not that it is short, but that it does not have a teacher that can be used

Other authors are getting better and better as they write, but you are getting better and better as you write

Come on, I've been waiting for a long time and I've finally opened a new book.

Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go!

After waiting for so long, Duan Xiaorong finally opens a new book, rush! ! ! Update quickly, be sure to eat enough! ! !