Qiyu - a Trip to the Liao Region

Name: Qiyu - a Trip to the Liao Region
Author: Iron Cocoon

by Iron Cocoon

ongoing Fantasy Unconventional Fantasy Male Lead

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When I was in junior high school, I wanted to write a book about one person and two souls. However, I never knew why I wanted to write a book, and my writing skills were weak. It took me until I was in college to write a hundred thousand words. Then there were changes in my family, my mobile phone number was lost, and the book eunuch. Tonight is two thousand twenty AD, the twenty-eighth day of September in the Gengzi year. The confusion in my heart was solved, and I finally knew how I wanted to write this book, why I wanted to write it, who I wanted to write about, and how I wanted to write it. I lament that if there were no twists and turns in life, my mind today would not be able to understand my own confusion.

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我想回到2015年10月51mo ago

Gotta change, gotta change

The characters grow too fast, the rhythm is not grasped accurately, the language and rhetoric are weak, and the words are dry and lacking in connotation, so they have to be revised.