I Will Practice More in Tokyo
by 1994 Time
About This Novel
"He did not play professional football, which is the luck and misfortune of world football." - Messi "Have you ever seen a ball with a speed of 200 kilometers per hour?" - Darvish (American professional baseball player) "Did you know? Swordsmen are generally divided into two types. The former lives for the sword, and the latter dies seeking the sword. But he is another, unique person." - An unknown swordsman. As a boy from the island country, Fujii received the standard gold finger, and he could get attribute points through practice. Football, baseball, kendo, and the monsters of the Heian era who were about to awaken were just easy challenges in front of him after practice. The new book was reborn in Tokyo and he cultivated himself in both literature and sports. One hundred chapters of the manuscript have been saved.
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Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
About recent book content
As for monsters, only the oden section was okay. I'm really not the type to write monsters. The high school years will be over in five chapters, and the college chapter will start with kendo, stage play, piano, and band, one chapter per year. I believe that people who can see this will be poisoned by me. I am very sorry, I am too willful. If I write it according to the first version of the outline, it will not be so messy. The university will return to the game mode of kendo that started with football, and then it will be a literary stage play, a pretentious piano and a promised band. After that, it will end with a hundred chapters and a million words. Thank you to all readers who have subscribed and supported me. I only make one promise: I will not be a eunuch and I will finish the book with one million words. Thank you all.
It feels good, but only a little bit
This book just doesn't go into depth enough in terms of daily life. I changed the direction after writing a little bit. It looks like spiritual practice and monsters appeared early but have little to do with the protagonist, but I still write about it. The appearance of Kamiya was very confusing, and his motivations were very confusing. In the early stage, I thought that falling in love with the protagonist would lead him into the other world, but in the end, he was basically just a fool. The core of this book, plus points, is only reflected in the numerical values in the first half, and the protagonist is called a single-minded person. He only practices one skill when he is determined to do it, and the plot is only written in one type. It is still what I said, simple and easy to understand. There is no process and it goes straight to the end. The reaction of the supporting character made me feel nothing about the growth of the protagonist. On the contrary, after I started practicing swordsmanship and slaying demons, the plot became more ups and downs, the rhythm became much better, and the protagonist's growth trajectory also became somewhat clear.
Personally, I still prefer the ones with monsters, but I like the ordinary things like playing football. They have a system, and they still go to play football and fight monsters by themselves. If they have a system and still engage in daily activities, it feels very low-level, and the upper limit is directly blocked.
It doesn't look good after there are monsters.
Some readers reported that the content of monsters in the middle and later stages of the book
In fact, I will try to write a hybrid style of Noragami and Natsume's Book of Friends, combined with kendo battles. It is not a universal superman, but a small and fresh Japanese romance, different from other spiritual recovery themes.
Opinion collection post
If you don't like monsters appearing later, please leave a message and I will consider it carefully and decide whether to modify the outline later. Also, is it better to play professional football or play in a band in an island country?
One, three, five, seven, nine, the old eunuch is a trap!
A very good member's work, why did it end?
Water word count, water experience task completed
I'll watch it after the musical is over. I'm not interested.
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Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
About recent book content
As for monsters, only the oden section was okay. I'm really not the type to write monsters. The high school years will be over in five chapters, and the college chapter will start with kendo, stage play, piano, and band, one chapter per year. I believe that people who can see this will be poisoned by me. I am very sorry, I am too willful. If I write it according to the first version of the outline, it will not be so messy. The university will return to the game mode of kendo that started with football, and then it will be a literary stage play, a pretentious piano and a promised band. After that, it will end with a hundred chapters and a million words. Thank you to all readers who have subscribed and supported me. I only make one promise: I will not be a eunuch and I will finish the book with one million words. Thank you all.
It feels good, but only a little bit
This book just doesn't go into depth enough in terms of daily life. I changed the direction after writing a little bit. It looks like spiritual practice and monsters appeared early but have little to do with the protagonist, but I still write about it. The appearance of Kamiya was very confusing, and his motivations were very confusing. In the early stage, I thought that falling in love with the protagonist would lead him into the other world, but in the end, he was basically just a fool. The core of this book, plus points, is only reflected in the numerical values in the first half, and the protagonist is called a single-minded person. He only practices one skill when he is determined to do it, and the plot is only written in one type. It is still what I said, simple and easy to understand. There is no process and it goes straight to the end. The reaction of the supporting character made me feel nothing about the growth of the protagonist. On the contrary, after I started practicing swordsmanship and slaying demons, the plot became more ups and downs, the rhythm became much better, and the protagonist's growth trajectory also became somewhat clear.
Personally, I still prefer the ones with monsters, but I like the ordinary things like playing football. They have a system, and they still go to play football and fight monsters by themselves. If they have a system and still engage in daily activities, it feels very low-level, and the upper limit is directly blocked.
It doesn't look good after there are monsters.
Some readers reported that the content of monsters in the middle and later stages of the book
In fact, I will try to write a hybrid style of Noragami and Natsume's Book of Friends, combined with kendo battles. It is not a universal superman, but a small and fresh Japanese romance, different from other spiritual recovery themes.
Opinion collection post
If you don't like monsters appearing later, please leave a message and I will consider it carefully and decide whether to modify the outline later. Also, is it better to play professional football or play in a band in an island country?
One, three, five, seven, nine, the old eunuch is a trap!
A very good member's work, why did it end?
Water word count, water experience task completed
I'll watch it after the musical is over. I'm not interested.
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Add some urban sports, the writing is quite good, I'm currently following it.
Very good, very comfortable
Even if two-dimensional otakus travel to Japan, they will still be bullied. Japanese girls are more realistic and can't stand the odor of otakus. I've finished reading the public version, and I think the football part is okay. If it were written along the lines of dominating all sports, it should be successful. But the author has to write about monsters in the end. Don't even think about it. The vulgar and cold fox monsters and cute little monsters are indispensable. The author probably has never been in love. I would like to give some good words to light novel authors: all of your protagonists are just fake templates with a nerdy mentality and cannot stand up as characters. Don't write emotional dramas if you haven't been in love before. Female characters are weak and tsundere, that's all. I think there is a way to write it, follow the rules of banned comics, and if you don't have a chance, just let the protagonist go. Natto bibimbap is quite tasty.
Finished reading on December 30th. It's a cool article. I recommend reading it as a sports article. The protagonist is born in a world with a monster background Engage in sports activities, such as football, baseball, etc. To be honest, the author writes really well about sports and the writing style is appropriate. The information was also checked very carefully and there were very few details.
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