King of Black Mist

Should you consider changing the title of the book: Lord of the Mists or something more attractive~

This book is a bit poisonous, let me tell you a little bit about it first, and then I will explain below that the protagonist, the heroine, and the protagonist's sister are all brainless idiots, and the personality characteristics of the virgin male protagonist are lower body thinking. Due to his parents' reasons, it is not easy to believe anyone who meets the heroine at first sight, and then joins the other team and then believes it because his sister believes it. It is inexplicable. The hero's sister is even more stupid than the hero. She has no independent opinion. The most disgusting thing is that the heroine is a virgin and stupid. OK here is the explanation. First of all, the author describes that the male protagonist is not easy to trust anyone because of his parents, but he falls in love with Yang Qinglan at first sight, and then they form a team. And then the heroine is a bit of a virgin. No, the protagonists are all a bit of a virgin. That's ridiculous. I saw that Bi, or what? It's the little girl with telekinesis. The author initially described that the male protagonist is not easy to trust anyone because of his parents, so he took the card of the mistress who is relatively low in threat. Why is the little loli who is ranked second in threat? I let him go without any restrictions, and then invited him to join the protagonist group. There is something wrong with it, right? You casually destroyed a little lolita in the slums, and then got kidnapped by the protagonist. Why should they cooperate with you? In the eyes of this little loli, the protagonist is shit. You can have the aura of the protagonist, but you can't make the protagonist brainless. Even if you take away his card, I won't say so. The result is that there are no restrictions. And I specifically said before that the male protagonist is not easy to trust anyone because of his parents. It's really just me. I'm just slapping myself in the face, and I don't know what the author's purpose is in portraying this Yang Qinglan. He only makes me feel a bit like a virgin, and then highlights that the protagonist is a creature that thinks from the lower body. It has no effect. I can accept that you have humanity before the end of the world, but you can't be brainless. Is the protagonist mentally ill? Okay, the protagonist's IQ is lowered due to the use of skills. I didn't expect this. What about her sister? His sister is also an idiot, right? Or is the heroine also a fool? Oh, I forgot that he is a Holy Mother. Even if he sees it, he will not say anything. Even if you collect the card and let him out, no one will say anything. No, when it comes to treating mistresses, people's talents depend on being attached to men. And then the protagonist also knows that the mistress's skills cannot be used against him. After being bound to him, he still chooses to take away the mistress's card. Why is he a greater threat than the mistress? The betrayal may be much higher than that of this mistress. In the case of this little lolita, she may have killed many more people than the mistress. After all, the mistress did not destroy a civilian cellar. As a result, the protagonist chose to believe this little lolita without any foreshadowing. She is like a piece of shit. And more importantly, I can't understand you. *** Other authors, even the most third-rate ones. An author knows the protagonist Madonna, and needs to give a reason. For example, this girl has helped him before, or this person is very talented. The author has no explanation. Anyway, I saw that there is no such thing, and the protagonist has a talent that can plunder other people's talents. If you kill him and absorb his talent, can't you just start pushing him aside? If you don't want to push the story sideways, you can also be a little bit sleazy and let the mistress collect points. If that doesn't work, the author has to write the protagonist, the heroine, and the protagonist's sister as a brainless idiot, which is hard to understand.

What other books does the author of this book have? 😶, I want to see it

I saw a few pictures and it's time to cut. I don't know what to say. I just quit when I saw a female soldier playing there. OK, this game talks about elimination by nature. OK, that's nonsense. The person who participated in this game did not kill anyone and set fire. If you really want to investigate this game, no one can believe it. I don't understand the true meaning of this game. If it is just elimination unilaterally, it should not only be a team, but a single person should survive, so that it can match the real meaning.

(Why should there be no less than ten Chinese characters?)

Opened high, and then 50-100, the chapters on the shelves were pretty average. After 100, the quality went up again. I understand why the collection is so low.

I suggest you give away all your resources and your ID card. What kind of Madonna is it? Author, don't write about life and death games in the future. You don't even know the essence of it? Forget it, just change it to a normal online game article. Is this monkey a teammate? Give it away if you have created any income? That mafia mistress is worth more investment than this monkey. Also, is the protagonist's sister a bit big-faced? What position does the weakest and most sluggish rookie among the three have in giving the team's strengthening resources to an outsider? Just because this monkey helps you raise cows?

After one or two hundred chapters, the protagonist's style became too arrogant, and his strength became less and less right. The subway attendants were also too easy to talk to, and the combat descriptions were average. The direction of the Invincible novel became increasingly uninteresting. There shouldn't be only one protagonist of this size, or why should there be only one. This is also a common question among time travellers. Is there really only one time traveler in a world? Why time travel? What exactly is the system? When there can be one thing, it can't be just one. Of course, daily life is beautifully written

I'm drunk. The author's writing is very good and the storyline is fine. The problem is that the protagonist's personal combat power is a problem. Every time he uses the big move or the small move, he hasn't hit a few times. Oh, it's very uncomfortable when he has no mana. He's almost immortal and still lacks mana. The title is illegal and has no taboos. Can't he be more crisp when fighting other miscellaneous fish? There is also the problem of perception. It stands to reason that the higher the combat power, the more the protagonist has evolved. Others will be blinded when they hide from the protagonist. Shouldn't the evolution of immortality be comprehensive? You've already outdone the others by a huge margin, so you can't still be so boastful, right?

Didn't you say that this author is just a battle brawler? Why did the female protagonist in Chapter 4 write so low emotional intelligence? What happened to the male protagonist who was dragged into the life and death game as an ordinary person and said a few swear words when he was sniped? If you have this rule, why don't you say it after killing the enemy instantly? What qualifications do you have for the male protagonist not to say swear words before he shows his ability? Does the male protagonist owe you anything (although the male protagonist should have no problem with falling in love at first sight)? But it really ruined the audience's favor. It's not as refined as you. It's so awesome to give poison points immediately after the third golden chapter. All I can say is