Bird Soul: Unparalleled National Warriors at the Beginning

The protagonist is unlucky, and it is better to use luck that affects reality. There are no mahjong works where the protagonist has very bad luck. At least the luck on the mahjong table will not be very bad. If you write the Wasiko panel and do these things, my evaluation is not as good as the blind Ichikawa panel at the beginning, and you are not happy. I don't ask for it to be always happy or cool, but the perception of the protagonist is just suppressed. Qu, there is no need for the younger sister's game. If you want to dress up as a woman to increase the role play, it would be a bit poisonous. In a mahjong work, you have to write about the impact of card games on the role play. How come the cross-dressing increased by 30%, then the protagonist knows why he should not dress up as an old man. The role play of Vasizi increases. Wasi Zi also has a prequel and a very charming role play. If you write it like this, for Although Vasizi's luck is considered to be very high, people will not think that he only has luck. Vasizi's card game and the character charm in the prequel are very high. When you write Vasizi's panel, you can't just have the desire to destroy the genius. He is also very good to his younger brother. The people who follow him in the prequel also have a genius. You have to write about his madness and his desire for victory. When writing the prequel, In the panel, you have to write about the control of people's hearts and human nature. It is not ideal if you write the next panel after failing to write the first panel well. Moreover, you also did not write about the influence of Vasizi on the protagonist. Vasizi is lucky and has a grasp of the changes of the times. Your panel's performance is good, but the protagonist's luck has not improved at all. You might as well not write this panel.

I clearly know that the plot is always unwilling to give in to one thing or another, and I can't give in to it. The protagonist plays so many roles, and the expressiveness of the well-matched role really cannot be expressed. In the article, others always feel the pressure, and then there is no meaning. The background of the magical mahjong world, and the protagonist always talks about scientific mahjong. What does it mean? ? ? There is no problem in reading tiles in scientific mahjong. I don't even understand the protagonist's strength. There are multiple combinations such as Qiang Yun Wasizi who has a high degree of compatibility, and Tianjiang Yipup who is a little lower, but his strength keeps jumping up and down and is unstable. It's really boring. It's interesting to set up the shackles of bad luck for the protagonist and use Wasizi's template as the main template.

I'm really convinced. What kind of plot is this? Deus ex machina. What does it mean to write like this? You have to learn the basics of cheating. You've laid the groundwork for so long and it's so messed up? Get your money back! ! ! ! ! If you write it like this, you might as well write that the protagonist is resurrected by Vasizi.

Usually when I see a mahjong question raised in the comment area, I will modify it, but I don't know why. A few times when I am modifying it on my computer and replying to the modified comment on my mobile phone, the comment will disappear inexplicably. I really am not deleting it indiscriminately. I will simply stop replying one by one in the future. I will modify it when I see the problem, so as not to delete the comment by mistake again.

The mindless cheating on Achihe is already at the level of the top 8 in the country. He cheated blindly and even used a worm as a cushion. He is a bullshit god. He is useless. This plot will send Achihe into the finals. I am speechless. I suggest you go with Xiao Linli 414

The subject matter is good, but the writing is terrible and the fighting is very frustrating. It is recommended not to read

Is there a group of authors? Please update soon.

It's really hot. The people next door don't allow comments, so I'm here to complain. First of all, the writing was pretty good at the beginning but! The twin classmates played mahjong with their younger sister and then seamlessly transitioned to playing three-person mahjong with their cousin. Did they then seamlessly transition to playing two-person mahjong? Let me study the review alone for several long chapters? I almost fell asleep while watching it. There is no plot at all? Who can watch this? Do you know how to write about playing mahjong? "Liu Shui Wen", "Water Plot", a disgusting novel, no wonder it has so many words. It's the same as the composition I wrote in elementary school, which took a long time to complete.

I hope I can write another 1.8 Million words. You are the only Gastrodia fan. Come on.

Playing mahjong is just playing mahjong, and there are so many inexplicable characters and subplots that I can't even remember their names. Now it's about family ties. It's confusing. The main plot is very blurry. There are too many subplots. Doesn't the protagonist want to become a strong mahjong player? I didn't see that he wanted to become stronger, and it almost turned into a hodgepodge that was about to be cooked.