
One Piece: Beginning Awakening Death Template
About This Novel
Travel through the world of pirates and awaken the Death Template at the beginning! Slashing fists and walking ghosts - the ultimate ice Hyōrinmaru, which is as cold as Aokiji! The ultimate flame flows like fire, burning Akainu's lava! Heavenly Lock Kills Eagle Eye! Fight Kaido instantly! Yun Ye stands alone in the sea of all nations, with five giant dragons behind him looking down, fierce and majestic. He points to his aunt and says: "I heard that you want to extract my soul?" PS: The protagonist has two identities, a navy and a king of the dark world (pirate).
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Official(26)Scraped 21d ago
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So the protagonist lights up his Zanpakutō but doesn't carry a sword? Do you have the ability to have a knife? So what's your name for a Zanpakutō? Zanpakutō are all unique, what's the point of having the ability to use a Zanpakutō with just any sword? Also, Zanpakutō Shikai also adds spiritual pressure, right? Why does the protagonist have nothing at all? Every time you add points, you don't add a Zanpakutō. Isn't the core of the Shinigami the Zanpakutō? It forcefully suppresses the protagonist.
Just one ability is enough, if you insist on doing so many, it will be a mess
good looking
Among so many pirate fanfics, this one is the one that I can read the most. Others either lick the protagonist or have problems with various abilities. In one of them, the protagonist's overlord color is top-notch, but he doesn't have the overlord color, and he didn't use it when the four emperors were fighting. I suspect that he may have never seen One Piece. Needless to say, other uses of Haki are pretty much the same.
It's so short, this author only disappears in a few minutes.
It's so short, this author only disappears in a few minutes.
**, any navy that appears is a brainless idiot, right? They are scheming. It feels like the author is a woman. I have watched too many Gongdou dramas.
constitution
Is the swordsman's physique inferior to that of a clone?
come on
Come on, it looks great, please support it. Lots of updates
I've read hundreds of chapters. It's pretty good to be able to write a Pirates fan to this extent. However, the writing about Pirates is basically unfinished. After all, it's hard to write until the manga is finished. Come on, I'll give you 5 stars.
Hyōrinmaru is nothing
It feels so bad, I don't know if all of my colleagues are Hyōrinmaru at every turn. Kyoka Suigetsu can be invincible with just her first ability, and she can play with the whole world. She is so powerful. Isn't it embarrassing if she uses Hyōrinmaru too much?
It's ridiculous. Zuken Kizai is enough for you to toss. You also have several Zanpakutō. The soul is too strong. One sword. Write Zanken Kizai well. In fact, it doesn't even need too much Kidō Kaidou. Deaths are based on hundreds of years. If you practice Zanken well, at least a great swordsman is proficient in Taijutsu. It's completely enough.
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Community(0)
Official(26)Scraped 21d ago
title
So the protagonist lights up his Zanpakutō but doesn't carry a sword? Do you have the ability to have a knife? So what's your name for a Zanpakutō? Zanpakutō are all unique, what's the point of having the ability to use a Zanpakutō with just any sword? Also, Zanpakutō Shikai also adds spiritual pressure, right? Why does the protagonist have nothing at all? Every time you add points, you don't add a Zanpakutō. Isn't the core of the Shinigami the Zanpakutō? It forcefully suppresses the protagonist.
Just one ability is enough, if you insist on doing so many, it will be a mess
good looking
Among so many pirate fanfics, this one is the one that I can read the most. Others either lick the protagonist or have problems with various abilities. In one of them, the protagonist's overlord color is top-notch, but he doesn't have the overlord color, and he didn't use it when the four emperors were fighting. I suspect that he may have never seen One Piece. Needless to say, other uses of Haki are pretty much the same.
It's so short, this author only disappears in a few minutes.
It's so short, this author only disappears in a few minutes.
**, any navy that appears is a brainless idiot, right? They are scheming. It feels like the author is a woman. I have watched too many Gongdou dramas.
constitution
Is the swordsman's physique inferior to that of a clone?
come on
Come on, it looks great, please support it. Lots of updates
I've read hundreds of chapters. It's pretty good to be able to write a Pirates fan to this extent. However, the writing about Pirates is basically unfinished. After all, it's hard to write until the manga is finished. Come on, I'll give you 5 stars.
Hyōrinmaru is nothing
It feels so bad, I don't know if all of my colleagues are Hyōrinmaru at every turn. Kyoka Suigetsu can be invincible with just her first ability, and she can play with the whole world. She is so powerful. Isn't it embarrassing if she uses Hyōrinmaru too much?
It's ridiculous. Zuken Kizai is enough for you to toss. You also have several Zanpakutō. The soul is too strong. One sword. Write Zanken Kizai well. In fact, it doesn't even need too much Kidō Kaidou. Deaths are based on hundreds of years. If you practice Zanken well, at least a great swordsman is proficient in Taijutsu. It's completely enough.













