Who Hid My Body!

After reading it, in my mind, the Rhine chapter scored 9.5, The Lyra chapter 9, the Holy Sound chapter 8.7, The Wildfire chapter 8.8, And the Return chapter 9.2!

Both Rajer and Hevinia seem to have been born badly, but their behavioral habits are not expressed at all. Let's talk about Hevinia. She is obviously the protagonist who came out of the Seed Zone. Her behavior and habits imitate the green tea watch of our lady. I really can't compare with Uru! . Greed for money, humbleness, petty thoughts and dirty thoughts perfectly express the thinking habits of little people. The more simple and unpretentious the person is, the more brilliant the contrast is! As for Hevinia, the green tea table from the seed area is smart, ice and snow cute. Do you think the seed area is a training base for young ladies, right? If you don't know how to draw, how many times can I help you with?

The reason why I say this is that the writing is very smooth and smooth, the storyline is eye-catching, the scalability is very good, and the world view is relatively complete and very good. This is more than the others. The shortcoming is that there is a lack of story extension (meaning that the author has been writing the main line without branch plots, and cannot fully show the world view and power system). For example, if the protagonist is a demon, why does it have no believers (the secret cultists who use wet blocks with the protagonist demon as the center)? Also, after a big event, the protagonist is left behind and is used by some small characters, and exciting content can be written. Keeping on the main line of exposing the ugliness of Zhengshen will only make readers bored. Keep reading the book and read it after updating more than ten chapters at a time. This is insufficient. I hope the author can adopt the opinions, thank you🙏 Don't spray if you don't like it!

Do princes and generals like Xiang Ning have the guts? In a world with superpowers, there really is something to behold. With the absolute crushing power of extraordinary power, low-level people like Ulu can really be calculated from birth to death, squeezing out all remaining value. The arrival of the protagonist Bai Wei, a soul similar to an evil god, ignited the fire of resistance of Ulu, a little man in the mud, even if the final price is the burning of Jin's soul. This is the first part. There are also three other good gods and four evil gods. If the author can maintain this quality of writing, it will be a masterpiece. I look forward to it. After reading a lot of novels and knowing a lot about writing routines, people tend to become numb. Although the author has traces of forced sensationalism, if it can make readers have emotional fluctuations, it is a success. Please keep it up.

The protagonist collects a middle finger and the body is 3% complete. Can it be more reasonable? At most 1% of one finger is too much

Uru has read about 90 chapters so far, and I feel very good after reading the first volume. "I became a bug because I met Luji." "But he became a flower because he met me." No matter how bad this life is, no matter how cheap, no matter how worthless, it is also... Left to me by my mother! He is the only thing my mother left to me! These two passages made me feel that Ulu had come to life. When he saw the little girl's aunt, he was talking about saving his mother, not his past self. . .

The advantage is that the characters are three-dimensional and the article is smooth. The best thing is "But he became a flower because he met me." The disadvantage is that the protagonist travels back to the game as a reality, which means that the game becomes a reality for the protagonist; however, it is not realistic to let the protagonist control the body and suppress the opponent. No matter how the game is played, it is impossible to fully follow the game mechanics after it is fully realized. The protagonist's combat performance and bewitching words during labor are less like Yu Chuan and more like the real Visas. The highlight of the second map was the mission. When I saw that it took 10 years to pursue the truth and hide the truth, I thought it was a shocking secret, but didn't expect this? There is absolutely no need to hide it. And the scientific and technological information was not saved? ? ?

This book is too depressing. The protagonist is just a bystander. The book is about a person retrieving his body. In fact, it is just a sad story with an unhappy ending as the author thinks.

Let me know if your extra bag is Bai Wei

But it only gets four stars for quality, so why should I give it three stars? Even if I ordered this book entirely. Because the failure lies in the explanation given by the author to Villania after the end of the third volume. Before I read it, I wanted to read the author's story at the end, because it was very exciting and I was looking forward to it, even if it was a little bad. But after reading the author's explanation, I was just as disgusted as in the third volume - the male protagonist was out of character. The author's quality (can't be called quality, but it can be called expectations) is gone. Because I found the author to be like that. He doesn't understand why some people don't approve of the heroine. He thinks that throughout the whole story, the heroine should be an unfamiliar white-eyed wolf. To be honest, it doesn't matter to me whether I raise her well or not, because you are not the real heroine. You will eventually die. How can you still be with the hero? What i care about is The male protagonist acquires more and more body parts, but is forced to do so by a very shallow and unconvincing backhand (hidden head). Especially since the heroine is not very smart at all, she would have sent it long ago without the hero. Although it is not as serious as the collapse of Brother Lu's character in Volume 16 of Practical Teaching But what I read was an online article, not Riqing. You are not in love, so why should I forgive you? What I read online is the plot. As long as the male protagonist is not so urgent and the male protagonist understands the female protagonist and takes the initiative to let go, I can understand it. He is a happy person. Anyway, you still have a backup plan. But what about reality? You are forced into helplessness. Forget it. Author, you are still giving crazy explanations at the end of the volume, but all the explanations are not to the point. Instead, it is revealed that you don't understand why I don't like the heroine. Do you really think it's just a white-eyed wolf?