As a Villain, I Captured the Heroine, is That Okay?

It's understandable that the protagonist is poisoned at the beginning, but later on the protagonist just throws the woman out to Dongfang Shuo, it's true that he has to take the woman with him

Generally speaking, the writing is good. After reading it, I found that there should be no outline. Various small pits can be laid out in advance (you can lay out more points, and some unimportant pits do not even need to be filled in. You can just mention it later. The small plot in the brothel at the end is good, as a character change of the protagonist, or the change of mentality after time travel). After dozens or hundreds of chapters, it can be used as a foreshadowing, which can be used as a small branch line to complete. The pace should not be too fast and easy to write. The division of realms should not be too strict. For example, the early and late stages of the same realm are both capable of fighting (everyone has their own experiences and battles when they reach the upper limit of a realm), and there are more fighting scenes that can be written. Otherwise, if you are cultivating an immortal novel, it will become like I only need one person to have a high realm, and I can pick on your whole family. Is this an immortal novel? What's the use of a sect if you only need personal force? You can also add a large formation setting. The sect is built according to the earth's veins. Activating the large formation can instantly increase the combat effectiveness, etc. The most important thing is the outline. Set up the main plot that will follow first. The appearances of some characters can also be well arranged. (You can also have many supporting characters who only appear in a few chapters, such as fellow monks. Each character has a little character description and a few strokes. When you come back later, you can also describe a half-chapter plot, and you can reach the word count)

There is really not much nonsense. I don't like such naughty people.

To be honest, the first twenty chapters are really not very good, they are all about introducing various settings, but as long as you read it patiently, you will slowly feel that this novel is getting better and better. It's really good.

I saw more than 30 pictures. I have the exercises but don't practice them. I don't know what I'm doing there every day. I'm just like a retarded person. I feel comfortable living in a cave. It's been so long and I haven't cultivated at all. I almost vomited.

The setting is too weird, that's not how heaven and luck work. Just the plot, without the main character, looks like a vulgar work that should have been written by a writer. The reason for this is the writer's hand. Then the author took this work, added two nondescript big worlds, will and destiny, to round out a work with a poor logic setting, and played with some fancy complaints and private goods, so the whole thing was like a broken pot, betting on a wave of readers' curiosity, making money if they can, and pulling them down if they can't.

The characters you write are all broken, right?

Do you think you are funny? There is so much nonsense and bad jokes.

I think it's okay, the rest is just make up.

You are a villain, so what you write now is like an infatuation.