Dao Ancestor of the Primordial Beginning

Yes, that's well written. Keep it up!

The old Taoist priest is very well written and realistic. His scene where he goes out to pick up the male lead is also quite funny. Keep writing, I'm waiting for the next chapter! The old Taoist priest is portrayed so realistically, perhaps based on the author's own experiences. The things presented in just two chapters are enough to make this a masterpiece. Looking forward to it!

Have a wonderful day, support and keep it up!

The previous text described a double perfection, right?

Writing a novel requires the ability to endure loneliness, regardless of whether your writing is good or bad, especially since you've only written 40,000 words.

I've finished watching. The child is young, but already knows how to struggle; he's quite precocious. I think the old Taoist is indeed in danger; he'll probably have to sacrifice himself to let the child cultivate immortality. The living conditions are very detailed. Those two bullying the child was going too far, he's so young…

The writing is excellent; the author is very talented!

Good evening. I haven't been feeling well these past few days, please forgive me for not visiting.

If you have money, you should make up for what you lost in the past.

I've been a bit busy these past few days, but I'll visit when I have a spare moment!