Moon of the Sun Slayer

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Sorry, I don't know why I thought of the Extra chewing gum commercial.

This is called no clicks? You're kidding me.

Wuhu~

Your writing style is fresh and refined, keep up the good work! Hehe

May Day is here, and so is Grape's visit. Wishing you smooth writing and pleasant reading, and even more so, wishing you and your family a happy and fulfilling holiday.

Does anyone even read my book? When an author asks this... It seems rather pathetic.

Actually, I sometimes wonder when it's appropriate to switch between point of view, especially when it comes to inner monologues and psychological activities. Too much of it makes me afraid readers will click the "X" and close the window. I also suggest the author take a look and think about it (although most online novel readers just skim through it).

I had the pleasure of reading your excellent work today, and I felt the protagonist was very resilient. He must also have a powerful backing. I applaud you, author!

Chapter One (Full Chapter) If anyone actually reads my book, can you feel the strong sense of "love" in it? P. S.: I really don't want to fail!