The Road to Immortality Is Long

First of all, as a reader, this is just my personal opinion (manualize it three times...). I hope everyone who likes "A Long and Long Journey" will give it a thumbs up... Turning to the story of Wang Xian and Mo Xiaotong at the beginning, it is rare to see an Xianxia with the heroine as the first perspective, and it is really fresh. The secret of Immortal Wang at the beginning is always worrying, and Mo Xiaotong's perspective always makes people worry about whether he knows magic. It was not until the fourth chapter that he felt at ease and it was better to hide it. However, there is a small opinion here. It feels that the pace is a bit slow. The golden three chapters always have to reflect the most exciting part of the novel. It is true that the opening chapter of "A Long and Long Journey to Immortality" leaves a good introduction. The two points of cultivating immortals and the identity of Immortal Wang are indeed good, but in general the first few chapters are a bit delayed. (Personal opinion, please give me a thumbs up...) Writing and reading, in my opinion, is a unique practice. The personalities of each character are well-written. As a female channel, it is natural and reasonable that there are fewer battle scenes, but the appearance, scenery and detailed descriptions can be more delicate. Compared with the boring, dangerous, and dangerous male cultivating immortality, the ancient female cultivating immortality naturally has to highlight its unique advantages. For example, the five-person team hired a killer as a small burden. They used it just right and successfully introduced the role of the man in white. It came naturally and came naturally. Thank you! ! The priests and prophets who appear in Chapter 17 always feel a little jumpy, and the lightning and sword skills are quite novel settings, but overall, they are a bit rigid. The World Network needs to be composed of various colorful branch lines, while the main line runs through the entire text, and must be prominent and clear. If the big world structure is the body of a work, then it also needs a "soul" to sublimate it. Here the author uses Mo Xiaotong's thoughts, "Why is Tao" as a collision of thoughts, which is ingenious. Mo Xiaotong's adventure in cultivating immortals is still going on. All in all, whether it's the Suzaku Cave or the Bear and Rabbit, it's also very interesting. As an ancient martial arts female, it's really fresh! ! ! Thanks! ! !

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