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When the spiritual world was in the Small Thousand Worlds, didn't they say at first that this human race was not the seventh in the spiritual world? What about the top six? Who are the first six people to enter the Palace of the God of War?

After practicing for more than two thousand years, I ended up with a man in his fifties who was speechless and had a lot of typos.

It's such a mess, I can't even write about it for a special show

I can watch Chapter 105, but I saw that the protagonist became the great elder of the Luoyun Valley Alchemy Pavilion as a third-grade alchemist, the third person after the sect leader Qingyunzi and the protagonist's master Yao Daozi. After killing a scrap (Elder Mo Li's apprentice), the protagonist took out the image stone to prove his innocence. The sect leader Qingyunzi was also brainwashed by the elder Mo Li to embarrass the protagonist. Earlier, it was written how important the protagonist is to the Luoyun Sect. The sect leader gave him great power, but later he was manipulated by an elder. Isn't this funny? I really can't watch it. Judging from Chapter 105, the protagonist is decisive in killing, has a life mentor (mysterious woman) who can give guidance on spiritual practice, a little witch (potential wife), and is good at martial arts, alchemy, formations, spells, and spells, but has poor talent. Here are some of the drawbacks: 1. This is the first time that the protagonist reveals the cheat to someone other than himself. 2. The protagonist, a third-grade alchemist, defeated Mingxiao Zhanchen to bring glory to the sect and eliminate the threat from the Lieyan Sect. The sect master of Luoyun Valley named him the Great Elder of the Alchemy Pavilion. His status is second only to the sect master Qingyunzi and the protagonist's master Yao Daozi. He is the third person in the sect and kills After becoming Mo Li's apprentice, Elder Mo Li can ask the sect leader to convict the protagonist. Even if there is an image stone that can prove that the protagonist did not kill randomly, the sect leader still believes in Mo Li's words, saying that the image stone can be used as a fraud, and asks the protagonist to produce other evidence. Which one is more important, the sect leader can't tell? 3. Qi refining is divided into nine levels. Those with outstanding talents can reach the tenth level of Qi refining. This is reasonable. However, later on, the fifteenth level of Qi refining is a bit funny. Also, it is reasonable to say that it is difficult to break through the tenth level of Qi refining. It should be written in more detail and describe the details of the breakthrough. Unexpectedly, the protagonist breaks through immediately. 4. In the Shiwan Desolate Mountains, the storyboard description of the spiritual corpse master and the mysterious woman is constantly reversed, making the readers confused and confused. 5. The protagonist learns how to make elixirs and makes a lot of elixirs for himself. This is okay. The main reason is that there are only a few hundred pills at every turn. There is no need to write so many. The protagonist can't use so many. Can you just write a few or a dozen? It can also reflect the preciousness of elixirs.

The way of heaven is misty, Time relentlessly urges people to grow old. Make people grow old, Cultivation is like prison, It's hard to escape the chaos. The thorns are thick and difficult to sweep away, The mind is determined to seek the way. In order to seek the truth, To add to the disaster, Less laughter. Passerby A: Damn, what a crazy thing you wrote. . . Bird. Poetry! No explanation! Passerby B: Oh NO... It's written just fine, but it's a bit painful to read. . . . Neighbor's wealth: Woof! ! Woof woof! ! Woof woof woof! ! ! (The translation is: None of my business, I don't understand, I don't understand!) Uh... Flash. . .

Sleepy, please support "Tao" 888 Zongheng coins. 2 Red tickets, plus a small reward, come on! ! ! Hurry up, this book is well written, but why no one reads it? We need to increase our publicity efforts.

The realm is unclear and confusing.

Thirteen years ago, my first cultivation novel was really shocking at the time. Looking back now, it has a lot of flaws. Alas, memories are always good.

The world view is grand and the characters are vivid. 5 Brushes

This scumbag still knows how to do it. The question is, do those things cost enough?