One Strike from the Divine

To be honest, the descriptions are very detailed and the imagery is vivid. Excellent, the writing style is mature.

Your writing is excellent! Very good!

The author's writing is fluent, and the dialogue is natural. With a grand world-building, this is a rare masterpiece; once it exceeds two million words, it's guaranteed to be a huge hit!

Ahem, I accidentally wrote too late and didn't have time to revise it. I won't write anymore tonight; I'll focus on revising the text. Please forgive any inconvenience. I'm a newbie, thank you! If you like it, please bookmark it.

That's all for now. To be honest, it's much better than what I wrote overall. I'm afraid you'll think I'm exaggerating, but it's the truth. Just keep reading, and I'll give you any suggestions.

If you're a man, you should fight for what you've got and be willing to admit your mistakes.

The God of War sounds a bit stronger than the Knight!

It's been really engaging since the last two chapters.

The story gets more and more exciting as it goes on, but I'm afraid that some readers might give up before they've even finished reading the earlier chapters.

Feng shui momentarily confused me, and I was instantly pulled out of the scene, hahaha.