
HP: Call Me Your Majesty
HP叫我女王大人
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- Completed
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- 1.1M Words
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- Anime & ACG
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- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
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- Zongheng
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This is a pretty good book among Harry Potter fanfics. However, I feel that the author's portrayal of some characters is not profound enough. Although I don't read a lot of HP fanfics, I would like to learn from the way the Blood Wizard and I faced Luna in Hogwarts: Swinging the Great Sword. Also as friends, in these two articles, Luna's high IQ and hazy prophetic ability in the original works are completely retained, and they are portrayed particularly well. But Luna in this article feels like she has lost her wits. She will only hide behind the heroine and say she is scared. She is scared when she sees this and is scared when she sees that. Because I personally am a bit of a Luna addict, I can't accept the author's portrayal of Luna. Moreover, the pace of the article is a bit long, so it just depends on personal taste. Anyway, I think this book is okay to read when you are in a book shortage, but if you want to read it seriously, forget it.
The magic reform is too serious. You wrote that the liar Professor Peacock in the second grade is so powerful that it is hard for you. Moreover, the utilization rate of magic in the Aegean continent is 0, and there is no elemental magic. So are you doing nothing in that life? And if you don't know it, you can write it.
I'm going to watch it. I want to ask if it's good.
Fan extra story~
(Taking over the extra "Heroes Homecoming" written by Ye Ye in Knights of the Lion Court, the images of some characters have been slightly modified) Extra Chapter: Spooky Christmas Eve Timeline: The first Christmas after the main war Location: 12 Grimmauld Place Main characters: Neville, Hermione, Daphne, Sirius, Lupin, Regulus Ghost, Kreacher 1. The "cozy" decor of Blake's home In the living room of No. 12 Grimmauld Place, a crooked Christmas tree is emitting a strange green light - Kreacher insists on using the "ancestral Blake decoration method". "These are... The mummies of foxes?" Hermione pinched her nose and took two steps back, looking at a string of dried creatures tied with black ribbons on the tree. "Traditional decoration!" Kreacher puffed up his chest proudly, "The old master said that the smell of death can make the festival more solemn!" Delphine was stuffing mint candies into the mouth of a vixen: "Now they are mint-flavored specimens, complying with Article 37 of the Regulations on the Disposal of Carcasses of Magical Creatures." The ghost of Regulus hung upside down from the ceiling, and his transparent hair swept over Hermione's head: "I was bitten by these guys when I was seven years old. I deserve to be made into a decoration." Sirius raised his wand: "How about we change to a Muggle style-" "Don't tarnish the old Black house!" Screamed the portrait of Mrs. Black. Daphne cast a silent spell with her backhand, and the portrait's mouth continued to open and close but no sound came out. Regulus whistled: "I've wanted to learn this trick for more than ten years." 2. Azkaban-style gift exchange The gift session turned into a disaster. "Is this... A sock knitted from the scraps of a Dementor's robe?" Harry shook open the gift from Sirius, and a spider fell out of the sock. "Purely handmade!" Sirius said proudly, "I learned my knitting skills in Azkaban." Daphne cast a fire spell to burn the socks to ashes: "Dementor's athlete's foot is contagious." Regulus floated above the pile of gifts: "Be content, the 'prison escape souvenir' he gave me back then was a piece of charred bread." "Weren't you moved to tears?" Sirius grabbed the holly fruit and threw it on his brother's head. The nuts passed through the translucent head, and Regulus sneered: "It was smoked!" Lupine tried to smooth things over: "At least it's more practical than the sweater Molly knitted——" "Moony!" Everyone looked at the door in horror, fearing that Mrs. Weasley would suddenly appear. 3. Ghost's Molecular Cuisine At dinner, Regulus insisted on "tasting" eggnog. The wine ran through his chin, forming a golden cascade across his sternum, and finally trickled from his pelvis onto the floor. Kreacher immediately rushed forward and wiped it: "Master Regulus's molecular cuisine!" "At least it tastes better than the water in Lake Inferi." The ghost smacked his lips. Daphne handed over a funnel: "It is recommended to pour it in from the top of the head and let it leak out more slowly." Lupine suddenly entered teaching mode: "Theoretically, the ghost's digestive system should-" "Shut up, Moony Face!" Everyone said in unison. Harry secretly stuffed mint candies into the pumpkin pie - after Regulus ate it, the whole ghost began to smell mint, like a human-shaped air freshener. 4. Physical Farce The "Ghost Apparition Fireworks" sent by George exploded in the living room. Regulus suddenly had a physical form and pinched Sirius' cheek with his fingers: "Merlin, it feels worse than a Dementor." Sirius stuffed his brother into the armor in the corridor with his backhand: "Enjoy your medieval experience!" Bang! Bang! Silver armor ran around the room: "Mother is right! You will always be a giant monster that won't grow up!" Daphne used a double-sided mirror to record the video: "Black Brothers limited edition haunted armor, starting price is 100 gold Galleons." Hermione suddenly realized: "Wait, why does George have magic that can affect ghosts?" Everyone fell silent and looked at Kreacher, who was secretly drinking eggnog. 5. Love letters under the mistletoe Neville tucked Daphne under the mistletoe, her ears as red as Ron's hair. "I might have been drugged... Or, uh..." Daphne stuffed a sobering pill into his mouth: "Wake up, Neville, you were just drugged by Fred." Regulus leaned half out of the fireplace: "Do you need emotional counseling? I have written 12 love letters and haven't sent them yet." "12 Letters?!" Hermione screamed, attracting everyone, "To whom?" Everyone:! Regulus turned into smoke and fled: "Kreacher! Destroy the iron box in the attic!" 6. Midnight Curse and Blessing When the clock struck twelve, Mrs. Black's portrait suddenly fell silent - Regulus cast a Silenced Curse on her. Sirius raised his glass: "Here's to the greatest rebel of the family." Regulus's wine glass passed through his palm and hit the carpet: "For the brotherhood that will always anger the mother to death." Daphne poured the wine on the ground: "For the unfinished potion in the Lake of the Inferi." Kreacher secretly used a test tube to collect all the spilled wine: "For Master Regulus' molecular collection!" Snow was falling outside the window, and for the first time real laughter came from No. 12 Grimmauld Place. In an iron box in the attic, 12 love letters written to "Miss C of Ravenclaw" are spontaneously burning, and the ashes form a smiling face. Postscript easter egg Early the next morning, an anonymous package was on its way - inside was a box of mints, with the message: "A Christmas gift twenty years late." - R. A. B.
There are lots of typos, grammatical errors, the protagonist looks like a quail, and the author deceives the readers. The plot is generally understandable, but it is still very uncomfortable.
This book is considered cunning in HP.
This is the second HP fanfic I have read (the first one was The Big Four of Zhi Luo Bai). When I read it before, I may have had the filter of just reading the fanfic, and I thought it was very good-looking. Looking back now, it is still very good (but it is not the same as before, and I no longer find it very good-looking, probably because I have read too many fanfics). The image of Daphne is still deeply rooted in the hearts of the HP fanfics with a refreshing style. It's a pity that Trani's book ended so hastily, otherwise we should have seen a Delphine 2.0
Poison, everything is poisonous. It is said to have no CP but is full of changes. The memory of the previous life and the settings of men are also poisonous. Those who can read it are really invulnerable to all poisons.
I watched it for three or four days and finished it in one sitting. First of all, I have to say that any book that can be read through is good. Traveling back to the original character, he basically integrated well into the entire environment, with little change to the plot, and gained certain advantages by using the prophet. Of course, the good things are always the same. Let me talk about the things that may be toxic (everyone's body is different, so you still have to feel for yourself whether you can accept it or not) First, it is a bit anticlimactic. The plot accelerates suddenly in the second half and ends suddenly. Second, some pitfalls have not been filled in (the protagonist's special physique, original power, etc.) Third, the protagonist has a male mindset at the beginning. He likes little lolita at the beginning, but at the end, seeing that everyone else is CP, he accepts the male character's confession (this is too little foreshadowing, I can't accept it) Fourth, the protagonist's strength was a little low towards the end. He was almost crushing the whole school in the first grade. By the fifth grade, he had developed for a long time and could barely surpass the level of the dean.
The protagonist Daphne (Sister D) is different from the "weak" or "Mary Sue" female characters in traditional fan fiction. She appears as a "queen" with both financial resources and magical talents. Her acting style is flamboyant and full of comedy. For example, the first thing she did after traveling through time was to call herself a "rich woman" and spend money like water in Diagon Alley. She even made fun of the fate of the original characters (such as questioning the whereabouts of Voldemort's nose). At the same time, Yeye cleverly integrates into the modern complaining culture and humorously deconstructs the original settings. For example, Daphne questioned Dumbledore's sweet tooth, teased Harry about his short-sightedness, and even called the basilisk a "war scum", giving magical creatures a brand new funny image. On the basis of retaining the main storyline (such as the Chamber of Secrets Incident, Quidditch match), the plot line adds a large number of original branch lines, such as the "Magical Congress of the United States" adventure and the "Dragon Hunting Team" plot, which expands the boundaries of the magical world while maintaining interactions with the original characters (such as working with Hermione, teasing Draco). Overall, this book uses humor to deconstruct classics and reshape the magical world from a modern perspective. Those who like easy reading and novel ideas, close your eyes and read!