The Supreme Superpower of the City

The beginning of this book is very good and makes people want to read on. I hope the author can consider adding some humorous plot developments. The beginning of the novel is good. I am looking forward to what kind of sparks will happen between the protagonist and the nominal fiancée. I read that you are a novice author. This should be your debut novel. Here are some suggestions. I hope the author will not use those bad street routines and settings. Finally, I wish you a great debut novel!

The writing is obviously quite good, but why are there so few people reading it?

Well written, keep it up! ! "The Legend of Xiu Yu Mo Xiu Xian" come and collect it, and pay attention to it when you have time. ! ! ! ! !