The Strongest Phone System

Everything has its limits, and novels are no exception. Authors must not forget the ultimate fate of each character!

This part has been slightly altered compared to the variety show version. Please don't attack me if you like Asu! I quite like Asu myself, and his departure now is to give him more screen time later! (Well, that's all the spoilers I can give.)

It's starting to look interesting, but I'm more interested in expanding our hard power.

Wow, this is so slow! How old is the author? It's too slow, the updates are too slow.

Having watched this far, I feel that the story's pacing isn't particularly tight and needs a bit more emphasis.

I also really enjoy looking at this street. Keep it up!

The logic is flawed. A run-down phone shop, about to go bankrupt, has three employees, two of whom resigned voluntarily, and then they claim everyone has their own ambitions… Would a normal phone shop have that many employees? I've seen many phone shops with only one person, or at least two, three, or even more salespeople, but this shop… I'm speechless.

Some unnecessary descriptions by the author could be deleted, which would prevent the story from progressing too slowly.

Writing should be like this: when it's exhilarating, it should be unrestrained and concise; when it's tender, it should feel like it's from another world.

It feels like we're drifting further and further away from the system...