I Am a Transmigrator

I ride tens of millions in a car to go to work every day, am I showing off? Hey... No more talk, the bus has arrived!

I have some at home too, do you want them?

After reading Chapter 39, let me briefly talk about it. At first, when I read the beginning, I thought it was going to create this kind of structure: start with a small character and work your way up step by step. I don't know what the author was thinking. Advantages: There are many time travels, but few time travels are so simple. The life after time travel is brought into the world with extremely fast writing, and it is very vivid and vivid. For a frustrated singer who drifted from Beijing, it also gave him a story about his indulgence in smoking, drinking and hoarse voice, which makes people remember it at a glance. The double points of excitement added later, with emotion as the supplement and career as the main focus, are even more eye-catching. As for the natural and clear language throughout the article, it will not make people feel tired when reading it. All in all, this article basically reaches the high level of Shuangwen. Disadvantages and suggestions that are not considered disadvantages: Too smooth sailing - just add a few minor setbacks. There is no sense of crisis in the early stage - it is best to make a foreshadowing to add luster to the future. For example, the younger sister Luo Xue is good. Such a character who is threatened can still attract readers. Lyrics - If possible, I can learn from my friends at the starting point and make it into BGM. Or just include a few simple sentences and more ellipses. The heroine - the heroine is too. . . . You know what I mean, good things come in hard times, right? Let's complain: What I want to complain about the most: I am a time traveler about this name. To be honest, I really didn't expect it to be a song writer. The second thing I want to say: Compared with other cool novels, the plot is too fast. I can understand that the author wants the plot to be compact, but you can't keep it compact all the time. You can dawdle a little more, water it down, and add some interesting things. It's understandable to just go smoothly, but isn't there something particularly attractive? For example, the protagonist and the supporting characters interact more, and the life of his sister Luo Xue can also be described more. Although the background of the protagonist is simple, the supporting characters are not. That's pretty much it. The author's writing is really good, and it is very suitable for the current readers' appetite. Maybe next time, I can learn from Dou Po and go back a little bit about the heroine. I believe the popularity can be further improved.

Why not update it?

Nostalgia for our youth~

I have to remind you that there are too few updates every day, so I decided to keep it for a while, because after reading a little bit every day, it doesn't feel like it did at the beginning! Goodbye, see you again after a while! Come on, author!

The green years are nostalgic

This is the first time I saw the song "Overdone" and it was actually a song sung by a cuckold. I will never sing this song again in KTV from now on!

Sorry, I'm a billionaire, I'm showing off my cards

I'm not happy. I didn't even get a monthly ticket in the 11 draws. Please try harder. I might have better luck next time.