Fight Fire with Fire

It looks pretty good, and it feels a bit soft. Is it handmade? Did a master craftsman make it himself?

That's too childish. My personal suggestion is to add some more obscure words instead; it will immediately sound more sophisticated. For example, "Kada Ubiwa," etc.

I've saved your work. Let's keep up the good work and encourage each other!

First of all, the supporting characters are quite interesting, but their character development isn't quite there yet (for example, Little Red Riding Hood is supposed to be an A-cup, okay? Just kidding). Secondly, the plot drags on too much; the early stages are slow-paced, and there's too much setup.

I was thinking, did I write it wrong again? Shouldn't it be "" (bai)?

It should be "save" instead of "just now," right?

It's somewhat interesting, but there's still too little. I'll bookmark this and wait for more episodes to air before watching.

After receiving some feedback from Red Bean yesterday, I've readjusted the paragraphs to make it easier for readers. As for the concerns about too much buildup or the slow introduction of the "golden finger" (advanced abilities), I think it's fine as it is. I have my own pace, and my books are always slow-burners. Please be patient; there will be exciting moments, climaxes, and even some face-slapping moments. Stay tuned!

Begging for clicks, recommendations, and favorites...

I've come to read "The Fangs of the Prison City," and I hope the author will visit my page and add it to their favorites!