The Bastard Hero

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The elementary school student (I don't want to be any kind of savior) has come to report for duty! I've read through it all, and it's not badly written, with a rather interesting plot. However, there's one problem: pay attention to paragraph breaks. Otherwise, a huge chunk of text piled together looks messy and is very difficult to read. Most readers won't bother reading such long paragraphs. I usually start writing a new paragraph every two or three sentences or five sentences.

Good luck, I'm late in signing the visa.

The world of Esgaia has just begun its conquest, and the trials of blood and fire will never end!

I've read it again, and it's still excellent. I'll continue to follow it.

Visiting again, it's still as wonderful as ever. I've already bookmarked it, hoping the expert will visit and we can exchange bookmarks.

Absolutely fantastic, definitely worth watching. I've already added it to my favorites. Feel free to visit and bookmark it again; let's encourage each other!

Keep it up! There aren't many Western fantasy authors these days, let's work together and encourage each other.

I am truly flattered and overwhelmed to receive this contract today. It was originally just a personal hobby, and although I had harbored some fantasies, I was still quite surprised and delighted that this day had actually arrived. I am ashamed of my poor writing skills, and I hope you, esteemed readers, will be kind enough to offer your constructive criticism and be gentle with your feedback.

Check in on Thursday, keep it up and support us!