The Laughing Crooked Immortal

After reading the first chapter, I would like to give you a review. I didn't laugh in the first chapter, because there were no laughs, and what impressed me most in the first chapter was Xu Yun. This character is quite smart, but I ignored the character of the protagonist. It's not that the writing is not good, it's because I have seen too many characters who forcefully pick up girls, so there is no personal highlight. For these points, you can refer to Lin Dada's "Very Pure and Cute". Although it is also about forcibly picking up girls, the highlight of the protagonist lies in the word pervert. After reading the second chapter, I felt that the plot was a bit weak. After talking about it for so long, I could only remember the name Qin Beast. It was quite good to give the main character a name, Qin Beast Qin Beast. I almost laughed. Although the plot is a little bland, the word count of 3103 is what I admire the most. Hey, let's not talk about it anymore. Let's go and update my 1,000-word chapter ("Bai Tao's Heart Is So Tired").

I have read a good book, and I read it late at night. I have a lot of feelings. I hope that book friends will also support my novel. Thank you very much.

"Children's Progress" comes to visit us!

The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword has split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. If I ask you who is the leader in the literary world, I will only see the author taking the laurels. An opening limerick, but the blogger laughed. I came here to visit you with my two works, "The Chaos of the World" and "The Sky of the Four Universes". I don't dare to ask for too much, I just hope that I can read my book and give some comments. If you feel that you are still motivated to read it, I will recommend it to your friends. I am very grateful for this.

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