Reborn as the Immortal Venerable of the City

Please give me a reward!

@ Criticize is a great writer Are you there? Can we recommend each other's chapters? Recommend each other's books.

As a reader, I really don't understand criticism. I really can't bear to comment on this book. I previously read the book "The Godfather of Business War" and thought that this book was slightly different from the books I had read in the past. The criticism captured the plot of most readers. Combined with the detailed description of various scenes in modern society and the psychological portrayal of the characters, it can indeed capture the readers' psychology. I was no exception. I was attracted by the criticism and continued reading. But as I read, the biggest problem emerged: the author delayed updating, or even did not update at all. It was common for the book not to be updated for ten or twenty days, which caused me to gradually become disappointed with the author. Since then, the impression of "not updating" has been left behind. I made a relatively fair comment at the beginning. After all, when I read Criticism's book for the first time, I thought the author was busy with life and had no time to update it. Later, I gradually began to doubt whether Criticism was really interested in writing. In the end, Criticism's hasty completion of "The Godfather of Business War" really surprised me. Is this really a qualified writer? Secondly, I would like to ask my opinion. What is the purpose of writing a book? Is it really written out of interest? Let's put aside the issue of updating or not updating for the time being, and let's talk about what is the difference between this book and "The Godfather of Business War"? The original version of the protagonist chose "Chen Ming", but he just replaced the son of Chen Changsheng, the supreme emperor of the Chen family, with a reincarnated immortal. The characters in this book are literally carved out of the same mold as most of the characters in "The Godfather of Business." So what are the differences between Qi Banyan and Xue Xuezhi in terms of setting and role in the book? Even the original text has been appropriated, but this book makes full use of the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Almost all plots are worded in this way, isn't it tiring? Moreover, Criticism has a soft spot for "grocery store" and "crying blood". "Chen Kuangge"? "Qifu Tu"? Even the plots and developments of the two books are almost identical. Since Criticism was able to write the book "The Godfather of Business War", we naturally will not doubt Criticism's imagination. However, is it disrespectful to readers to use almost the same plot as the original version to develop a new book? I feel aggrieved to spend the money to read the criticized books. I beg for criticism. If you can't continue writing, it will end the writing industry. Since you want to write and put it on the shelves, you must be worthy of readers. I don't expect you to have a writer's heart. At the very least, you have to follow the rules of a writer. Readers liking your work is the best compliment to you. You must be worthy of your readers, right? No matter what the reasons and excuses are, since there is a beginning, there must be an end. Respect yourself!

The author has given up and won't update

Can the author please be faster? It's so beautiful. I can't update it every few days...

The author has made great efforts to code and update

The New Year is over! Resume normal updates!

Asking for monthly ticket

One chapter a day, updates are a bit slow

With confused logic and a language barrier, Gang Jin actually beat a foreigner for a long time? Hehe