Imperial Power

It's actually quite well written, but it's a pity

Too much writing is wasted on irrelevant people, and the structure of the article seems complicated. There is a fight, and even the inner activities of the children watching are described in detail, it's so procrastinating.

This article is really well written, but if the author could refine it and remove the water, it could really go up a few levels.

"World of Esgaia" comes to visit. The battle of the world has just begun. The test of blood and fire will never end. The world is not destroyed, and the battle continues!

Haha, this ending is beautiful

I didn't explain anything, so I overdid it, and my grades were not satisfactory. Let's start a new book.

Friends who like the history of the late Yuan Dynasty, thank you for your advice on the new work Red Scarf Tribulation!

Both of them are at the Grand Master level, so I don't know how they will win or lose. I guess there will be a fight between the two, because Du Tang's goal is the throne, and just like the queen, he must clear obstacles. If the queen fails, then if Du Tang successfully takes over as the eldest prince, he will definitely regard Du Rui as a thorn in his side. And Du Rui has a dragon in his body, so he must have a feeling for Du Tang, and knows his evil background. Of course, he cannot tolerate his rise to power, and can only stop him with a fight.

Fan Yang is rebelling and Chang'an is still in civil strife. He is really looking for death.

Once Chang'an is defeated, how can we regain the rivers and mountains? There is still so much malice in the sky.