Hunting the Heavens

To be honest, after reading too many novels like this that are deliberately pretending to attract the heroine, I find it very boring. Let's think about it personally, if one day we can really travel through time, will we work hard for food, clothing, housing, transportation, survival and immortality, or will we go to pick up the heroine out of nowhere? I think normal people should cherish the opportunity to practice and learn!

It's so good in the original work, but you have to pretend to be this one. Very shameless

So, in Hunting the Heavens, who did the protagonist kill? Apart from giving away skills and things, and then practicing on my own and traveling across the world, I didn't do much! ! Isn't this just a good person? I didn't see who I was killing, that's unethical!

Garbage, so messy. Zhu Xian broke through the Black Water Black Snake's defense, got its essence and blood, and transformed it into a personal Black Water Black Snake. Then he could break through and practice [vomiting] [vomiting] [vomiting] and was seriously injured by the Black Water Black Snake again.

I want to know that the protagonist gave all his current skills to Ye Fan in the 20th chapter! How many times did you send it later? Did you finally marry Ye Fan? The national martial arts he possesses, the method of killing immortals! Or is it that the protagonist is a descendant of Ye Fan who came to help his ancestor?

The subject matter is great, but it's too messy and I feel like I didn't plan it in advance!

The content is well written and the writing is good, keep it up! ! ! "The Legend of Xiu Yu Mo Xiu Xian" come and collect it, and pay attention to it when you have time. [Flower, flower]? ? ?

Others are trying to trick the enemy, but the author is trying to trick the protagonist. Like a fool. Whatever I do, I always remember it.

I'm afraid this protagonist is nothing! I feel like what the author wrote has no logic at all!

I've read dozens of chapters, but I don't know what it's about. The Black Snake bloodline is more powerful than any other body. When someone wants to kill you when you first meet, you turn around and become your teacher! There is no lower limit, it just made me cry. There is no foreshadowing of the Great Qin, no macro introduction to the world, and in the first few chapters, there are inexplicable fights with gods and Yang Jian and Li Jing entering! Now that I see this, I really can't hold on any longer. I'm already terminally ill, so don't enter unless I'm resistant to highly toxic substances! !