The World of Inscribed Runes

To be honest, the emotional aspect is really poorly written! ! ! ! !

I can't understand many places and the sentences are not fluent.

Very good

Very good

It's an interesting article, but I feel like it has a flaw. The article has always been a dialogue between characters, and the description of the situation is also very important. Keep up the good work and encourage each other. Already collected and looking forward to visiting again, "Xiantu" is here to call you!

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Friends, please read the comments and tell me if you think there is anything wrong with it@

Thousands of words are stuck in my heart, Mingwen Tianxia is finished, please look forward to my subsequent efforts.

EMm, this is my first book, and it is not satisfactory in many places. I hope I can improve it. Now I have a new book called "Future Hunter", which is on this site. I hope everyone will support it. The plot and writing style of this book are immature. I also realize many shortcomings, but I have feelings, so I will update it to two million words, which can be regarded as the completion of the world of inscriptions in my heart and the realization of the fantasy that suddenly awakened.

It's really rubbish. It's really uncomfortable to watch. I have to come here to comment. This rubbish.