My Years as a Tomb Raider

It makes no sense and is really ugly.

They're cracking down on tomb raiding every day, but would they really dare to do this? This isn't like Hu Bayi's story from the 1980s.

They might as well just make a movie called Infernal Affairs.

You've actually written about deities? Laozi? Venus? The Jade Emperor? The Snake God? The Lord of the Three Realms? You should rename this book "Journey to the West Prequel."

Why is there always a traitor? Why is it that every time a traitor emerges, something appears in the coffin to save the day when danger arises? Is your father lying in that coffin? Once or twice, I can accept it. But how many times has this happened?

The author has no writing skills and no cultural background. What was the point of the book Grandpa gave you? All you do is flatter and praise each other. I'm speechless. You don't say anything when you see any obstacles, but when others do, you chime in with a few words, but you still don't get to the point. Where did you read any books?

You've made tomb raiding sound like cultivating immortality.

I don't really like it, I have no appetite.

Ling Zhao, Northern School Tomb Raider Notes

Xiang Duanduan wrote it better.