The Martial Saint

I'm not too young mentally. How could I do such boring things? This episode is very bad.

Most of what is written here is nonsense, Rory is so rude.

Speaking of your sister, half of each chapter is repeated.

After reading 60 chapters in a row, the writing is a bit unsatisfactory. Accepting a disciple is a bit casual. Alas, the previous writing is so good.

Without the two words "then", wouldn't it be able to connect to the rest of the story?

Too wordy. The old woman's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long

I say this at the beginning of every chapter. I'm really speechless.

If you can't fucking write, then don't write. Half of the whole novel is just paddling.

Fuck, every time I open my mouth, I'm talking, can I change my lines?

There's so much nonsense, can you just be more direct?