Our 1654

Most readers are liberal arts students, and they prefer technical ambiguity and emotional excitement. The author uses scientific knowledge and thinking methods to carefully craft the work. This work is a masterpiece that can stand the test of time, but it may not be lively enough for most readers today. I hope that once it is known or noticed by a specific group of readers, this book will definitely become popular. I believe this is the thinking of this group of readers who have been insisting on reading your book so far.

First of all, I am a subscribed reader, although I never tip. The following are all ugly words. 1. This book is already overdue. Although you can open a sequel with a new owner, or continue to sell mutton with a false head, but you haven't, so you are sorry to us. 2. I think it is natural to spend money on reading books and subscribing. No matter what you say, those who read pirated copies will not spend money, so can you not complain about reading pirated copies in the text? After all, it doesn't matter whether they watch the original or not. 3. Rewarding is a matter of mutual affection. Appreciating something that happens naturally. What is the point of giving a reward at the end of each chapter? It has a strong sense of street performance. Do you want me to give you a BGM of Er Quan Ying Yue? It's not impossible, it affects my mood. . . 4. The most important point is that this is a book site. What you are writing is a novel. The author is selling something private. It is understandable to complain a few lines. But every chapter complains about the world from beginning to end. What the hell is it that you complain about every few lines? Can't you just write the plot directly? We can see the difference between the two, we are not stupid. If you want to complain, go to the forum and open a thread to complain. Why do you write it in a book and write it so frequently? It brings you back to reality every two seconds and cuts the plot into pieces. Do you know that it affects the sense of reading, Hun Dan? I didn't pay to subscribe just to watch you complain, Hundan. . . Orz 5. A group of losers in real life, they are arrogant when they pass through, they act like they are saviors, they kick people's butts at every turn, one mouth is a celebrity, one mouth is a time traveler, Akito? Those are our ancestors, do you know how to respect them? **You talk about wanting equality, but when it comes to feeling distressed, you actually have a condescending and superior attitude. It's really disgusting, Hun Dan. There is always a strong sense of alienation between the time traveler and Akito. It's a failure. Do you understand? So many questions, now you know why there are so few subscription rewards? Look for problems within yourself! Above

This book is really disgusting. It is full of self-righteousness and a sense of superiority that makes everyone drunk. After learning a little thing and seeing a little thing, I think I understand the truth and think I can solve all problems. All day long, I wonder what I will do without a country and what I will do without a government. Little do they know that people who really want to change the world, create a better future, establish lives for the people, establish a heart for the world, cast a backbone for China, and create peace for all generations are working hard with their heart, blood, sweat, tears, and youth. What have you done for all this? Just wrote a novel and gathered a group of like-minded people to spread your extremely selfish and childish evil ideas? Are you worthy of the surname Zhao? Are you worthy of becoming a flower grower? How disgusting! You will eventually be abandoned by the times.

Most of the Chinese people I have met often get angry easily when discussing with others. The reason is that other people's opinions are different from your own, but you do not accept your own opinions. I was the same way when I was young. Regarding my inner activities at that time: The view that was undoubtedly correct was not accepted! Looking back, there are doubts about whether the viewpoint is correct, but there is no doubt about the individual's inner judgment of self-identification and that his/her position is correct. Agreeing with opposing views means denying oneself. Not everyone can happily accept the process of self-denial, although this is a way to improve themselves. After denying that self is the criterion for judging value, you will be much more relaxed when looking at other viewpoints. However, the education experience of most people and our culture* naturally lead to the view that for the group I cover, I am the standard. In the group I belong to, the standard is the mind of the leader of this group. Humans are social animals and live in groups. Individual opinions may differ, but they will not be so great as to negate the entire group. If it comes to this point, it means the split of the group. There are many scenarios where schism occurs, and the forms vary. When the cohesion of the group is strong, individual fragmentation will occur at most. When the group is scattered, it is easy for the group to fragment. From the Han Dynasty to the Song Dynasty, there were individual schisms from Zhongxing to Zhang Yuan and Li Hao, but there were no large-scale group schisms. During the period of intermittent decline, although there was a small settlement of Zhang Meng, the Ran Min group was larger. Looking back at the opponents of the Han civilization: Tuyuhun was established as a result of the will of the leader of the mind to split the group. As the chief thugs of the Han Dynasty, the Southern Xiongnu fought against the Northern Xiongnu and performed better than the Han army in order to prove the correctness of their actions by surrendering to the former enemy. The mercenary legions of the Tang Dynasty also show that the Han civilization was strong until this period. The weak side has symptoms of Stockholm Syndrome to some extent. When civilization declines, group divisions occur on a large scale. Green Camp has the style of the Southern Huns in those days, and the Bank of China said that the traveling vehicles carry a lot of energy. Without the Age of Discovery, Vaishyas and Shudras might have been our ultimate end. Groups have common cultural beliefs, but tampered cultural beliefs supported by lies and deception cannot unite the group and resist disturbances from other civilizations. Although some vested supporters were cultivated, times have changed, and the aspirations of the Manchu Brahmins were ultimately shattered. Does culture need to be reconstructed, and how can groups be reconstructed? Eliminating internal pressure and weakening the level difference may provide a buffer time for plundering the world's wealth in the era of horse racing. The challenges that travelers may face are more troublesome than the restoration of technology.

It was indeed by chance, maybe because I wanted to know what 1649 meant, that I came across this book "1649". Personally, I feel that the beginning is pretty good, especially when the five directors traveled through time, I thought the story had just begun. This is the first time I have watched the five protagonists travel through time. It will test the writer's ability very much, and I am quite looking forward to it. Later, the five directors came back unexpectedly and prepared very long props before putting them back on. To be honest, if the author hadn't described the various technologies in such an in-depth and detailed manner, I would not have followed. It's longer than the * in Tomato's "Jiuding Ji"! Let's talk about the good things first, and then talk about the areas that I personally think need to be improved: 1. The technology content of * is indeed high. Whether it is from Du Niang's perspective or her own accumulation, many aspects are in place. The description of small technicians, especially their conversations, has very pure industry terminology. I really need to give it a thumbs up! This is also the biggest highlight of this book that is different from others. I hope * can stick to it and carry it forward. 2. The comments on that world and some social issues in the book are quite profound, with a profound rationality. Of course, those are all matters of North Korea, and China is harmonious. Hehe. . 3. Another thing worth affirming is that I personally feel that *has nationalist thoughts, but it is not a narrow nationalism. For example, the little * mentioned has a lot to praise and learn from, and * has also been pointed out, which is good. Europe has been fighting wars for hundreds of years. Europe can prosper together, so why can't East Asia prosper together? Is it because we don't have the ambition and courage of others, or do we lack the national strength of others? *, Let's integrate the fine varieties of Xiao* into the new national spirit! Those great spiritual fires of the Han nation that were picked up from the Tang and Song dynasties but extinguished after the Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties! 4. Leave the following blank for now and wait for other book friends to add them. . . . Now let's talk about the shortcomings, there will be many, I hope you can see: 1. You can transfer scientific and technological knowledge to us, but do not transfer *knowledge, especially if it affects reading fluency. Just record the*records of Chapters 1 and 2 as soon as you come. These are all things that have been swept away in the trash can by the time-travelers. You are still rebelling against them in the trash can. What are you doing? It will only drive away impatient readers. 2. Personally, I feel that your outline may not be written well. Some places are written down, and the writing is smooth and flowing; some places are stuck, and some historical materials will appear that affect reading. *, Internet writing should be smooth and refreshing. If you have time, write an outline or refine it a little. Even if you sacrifice a little update, it is worth it, but you have to make sure to update it every day. 3. Never use flashbacks, please. The time-traveling pig's trotters are not about defeating the *oss in the end and having a happy ending. What drives us to continue watching is nothing more than two things: one is the wonderful process; the other is the final ending. Okay, your little brother just told me the ending. We all know the ending. Once the process reaches its lowest point, what else is there to look forward to? In the future, please don't have any flashbacks, please! Of course, the problem with the subsequent description of Brother Daolang's story is harmless. 4. I personally feel that the five directors are the five major governance priorities across the world: one is the construction of political systems and spiritual civilization; one is mechanical processing construction; one is chemical industry construction; one is agricultural and medical construction; and one should be military war. However, the description in the article is a bit messy at the end. For example, Big Bird, the biggest leader, appears the least frequently, not as frequently as his uncle and supervisor. Ming people can describe it appropriately, but no matter how they write it, readers can't substitute it. 5. Stop using the terms "travelers" and "travelers". Other writers are careful not to use the term "travelers" to remind readers, but *isn't one here? I want readers to remember that you are all time-travelers and you do not belong to this fictional world. To put it bluntly, it is still a matter of sense of substitution. 6. The narrative method should not be like watching movies or montage to force the readers out of the story. The following is an example: Okay, let's take a look at the content of the word document on the time traveler's computer screen. . . We can imagine that we are the time-travelers writing suggestions in front of the computer, or the bystanders above all time-travelers, but please do not remind us that we are watching a movie or an illusory time-travel drama. Well, this is a matter of narrative immersion. 6. The following is supplemented by readers 7, 8, 9. . . Finally, I would like to say: *Brother, if you want to take writing as a career or become a top writer, you have potential, but you need to learn more top-notch writing techniques, and at the same time develop your own technical characteristics; if you just want to make some milk powder or cigarette money, your current level is basically enough.

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Facing someone who wanted to kill him, Bei Ming said: "Be my son, and the throne will be yours sooner or later!" Facing the siege of hundreds of millions of powerful enemies, Bei Ming said: "What's the use of having more people? Don't we have to come one by one?" Facing his apprentice and grandson, Bei Ming said: "You bully your master and destroy your ancestors, and you don't even recognize me as the ancestor!" Facing his despairing opponent, Bei Ming said: "Don't give up! Give it a try, I'm still waiting to see your excitement!" Facing the sky that keeps slipping into the abyss, Bei Ming: "Should I give him a lift, or should I kick him?" Xianxia (Tianguan) asks for support, updates twice a day, the book has become fat!

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