Jianlai: Fishing in Lizhu Cave at the Beginning

So far, the writing is really good, better than other articles. Judging from other places so far, and comparing it, I feel that your writing is still good, not like a systematic one. I feel like it's better not to use it here, just have some system text class. A little cheat is much better than the system one. Also, updates are slow

It's disgusting to steal the protagonist's wife, eat the food of fan fiction, and stuff history into the readers' mouths

There's no need to rob Ning Yao. Don't you know that moving the heroine of a novel is a taboo in fan fiction?

You can watch it if you haven't read the original work. After reading the original work, some of the timelines are messed up. Are you writing this after watching the anime? I haven't watched the anime.

Yun Shu's story ends here. Thank you everyone for reading this. See you in the next story.

Isn't this simply diverting Chen Ping'an's plot to the protagonist, and then the plot changed a little bit,

How could Ruan Xiu leave Lizhu Cave at will? How could he hide the secret? Jianma had to rely on the lotus leaves given by Qi Jingchun to leave.

Is it still Jianlai without Chen Ping'an? This is complete bullshit

The only feeling is that it is much faster

A piece of writing written by Chen Pingping