Jian Lai: Guarding the Great Wall of Sword Qi at the Beginning

Not bad, but it would be nice if I could continue writing

To be honest, Chapter 33 is so poisonous. If you want to write a cool article, you have to have fun all the way to the end. Suddenly, Chunhua is raped, her clothes are torn off, and people are on top of her. She feeds Akaashi halfway through the fun, right? Even if the male protagonist doesn't accept her, she is still a female supporting character. Can this get 9.3? I have read many articles that are not as high rated as this book but none of them have such poisonous points.

I feel like the weird ending is too sudden. I suggest a spin-off.

All I can say is that it looks a bit cool

Dear author, you can first take a good look at the personality of each character in the original novel, and then make a fan fiction outline to speculate on each character's inner thoughts and choices. In the Jianlai worldview, the murderous aura and evil spirit of heaven and earth will not allow such powerful natal flying swords or weapons to appear.

It feels a little short, but it's okay.

It sucks. Pig's feet can't afford this name. Contact us to change the name.

It's great, I loved watching it, but it's a pity it's over.

Isn't it good if you don't write? Just changed the male lead. Read it as a cool article

After reading it for so long, I feel so happy with just one word