Douluo V: Alien Auction House

What is written? It's a mess. It ends after a while and then continues. What the hell?

Why don't you check it after it's generated? I won't complain about the settings for now, fans can indeed change them at will. But what about the confusing plot and high-frequency conflicts? Typical, Xiao Wu's first appearance: a person from Shrek Academy, called "Third Brother". 2 Times: Just after coming out of the forest, I found Acacia Heartbroken, who had no human friends yet, so I called him "Tang San who was still at Notting College" and became a shop assistant. 3 Times: Transformed back into Shrek Academy, calling "Tang San". Every time Yu Dashi jumps, it's as if he's debuting for the first time, and then the protagonist's men come out to prove themselves before beating him away. Many events have no beginning or end. This chapter happened, but after a few chapters it will be as if it never happened. Many characters frequently switch background settings. The protagonist opens an auction house and then creates a sky screen list. In short, it seems like every few chapters are unit dramas. A weak AI model is so particularly forgetful. One thing I still want to complain about: The Great Finger of Annihilation doesn't even have advanced heaven-level fighting skills, so how can it smash stars in one go? Is this what Daluo Jinxian is using?

The theme of the auction house is very interesting, but the timeline is very confusing. When Tang San was plundering resources, he talked about the Soul Sect, and then he was level 31. Tang San, who was at Notting College at level 31, had never met Dugu Bo. How could he know about Dugu Bo's Ice and Fire Eyes? Moreover, the original level 31 was no longer at Notting College. There is also Xiaowu looking for Lovesickness Heartbroken Red. How could Xiaowu know the name and smell of the fairy grass? You said that Tang San knew about the Ice and Fire Eyes, so shouldn't he have already given Lovesickness Heartbroken Red to Xiao Wu? Then why is Xiao Wu still searching? Secondly, the names of many people in it are very strange. Ning Fengzhi basically never calls Jian Gu by his real name. They are all Uncle Jian, Uncle Gu, and each sentence you wrote is an ancient banyan. The messenger of Poseidon Island calls him Bo Saixi Island Master, and Qian Renxue calls Bibi Dong's mother in the early days. It feels very fragmented when reading.

It's well written and it would be better if it could be updated faster.

Very good, hope it can be faster.

Author, keep up the good work and keep up the good work.

Very good, come on, keep updating