【Original title: With five hot guys to play with, who needs to be a lovesick simp?】
【Fake sweet-and-innocent girl with a knack for seduction + from universally disliked to universally adored】
【Elite academy + beloved by all, face-slapping satisfaction + a battlefield of male rivals + 1VN investment game + regret】
Xia Zhizi is the only student from a poor family at Pulan Academy, yet somehow she has caught the attention of five young masters.
The young masters make a game of it:
Whoever can force her to drop out first wins a generous reward.
All five are prodigies blessed by heaven:
Jiang Zhiwang is arrogant and sharp-tongued. He loves extreme sports like rock climbing and bungee jumping, and is a lone wolf who pursues freedom and breaks the rules.
Ouyang Jincheng is an elegant artist, a natural talent in music and painting who can manipulate people with ease.
Ji Linyuan is a cool, calculating science student, a refined scoundrel behind gold-rimmed glasses, and a legendary math genius.
Then there are the Song twins: Song Jun, sunny and handsome with exceptional athletic ability, and Song Yi, a shy, gloomy, puppy-like boy with a penchant for keeping people captive, and a complete lunatic.
The five equally popular heartthrobs take turns playing games with her, but Xia Zhizi, posing as a delicate little flower, weaves between them and makes them gradually fall for her.
Once she has earned enough to pay for her studies abroad, Xia Zhizi dusts herself off and leaves.
Only then do the young masters realize that they were the ones being played all along.
At that moment, they completely lose their minds.
What I saw in front of me really made me feel useless. Even if it's a fact, I won't explain it long enough... The ending is very sloppy
It looks good in the front, but it sucks in the back.
When will Naruko release a new book? It's already early September
He's really good-looking, but the ending is too sloppy
The middle is very interesting, but the ending feels a bit sloppy
I really hope to give the heroine a more exciting ending
Is it over so soon?
Nariko answers a few questions:
1. It is indeed completed for the sake of completion.
This book is not a matter of whether the data is good or not, it is black, and it is still on the blacklist of the website [faint]. It is already good that it has not been banned.
Writing like this on a high school campus is too explicit. If I continue to write, there is a risk of being blocked. I will be devastated [tears] if all my hard work after being blocked for several months is undone. Moreover, the number of readers in the background is in the 30s and 40s every day. There are very few people in the background who are actually reading. According to this loss, basically no one is reading it in less than half a month.
2. The original plan was to abuse the male protagonist, and the female protagonist was abused in the early stage, and then chased his wife in the crematorium.
Now the plot has begun to pick up, but it was aborted when it started. The heroine was frustrated at the beginning, and the story was exciting in the later period. However, because of the above reasons, it was about to end before the excitement started [tears]
3. The problem of hasty ending
It's definitely sloppy. I could have written about 300 chapters, but the remaining 200 were merged into one chapter. It's very sloppy [drooling]
Therefore, in order to avoid being hacked again, the new book has a different story background. This time it is written about adults (who are already honest). The new book will be available in early September. It is also a 1vn counterattack. If you are interested, you can squat.
The ending is too hasty. I stay tuned for updates every day. It's the ending for the sake of the ending.
Part 2: Judging from the copy, I thought it was a light-hearted article about dog training where the female protagonist plays with the male protagonist's group without touching any part of her body. However, the identities are very different and there are 0 normal people + the group's favorite female partner + the heroine's own burdens that she cannot let go of. The heroine is crushed to death. The atmosphere of the whole text is like a story about female abuse in a copy of a horror game.
The ending is hasty and the plot is sloppy. The setting and plot are very novel, but there are so many plots that I want to unfold that I can't pull them back. A lot of scenes are added to the supporting characters in order to abuse the heroine. The rhythm is like a high-speed roller coaster that rises and falls repeatedly. It's exciting but the impact is too fierce.
The male protagonist's roles are unevenly distributed, and the emotional line is not explained well. There are too many settings for the male protagonists, and 99% of the time, one person's settings can be written into a separate document, and there is no balance.
At first, I thought I would conquer the next one after talking to Jiang for a month, but the result is that almost all the text is full of disrespect for the heroine; Ouyang has a close relationship with the vicious female partner, and there is not much room for development; Song was given a complex character, and Mad Wan only tortured the heroine, and there was no revenge in the end.
It is written based on my impression of Zhui Wen, so it is normal for there to be some discrepancies.
This article has not been found to be a meal replacement and it is the author's first work, so it is well received.
——Original review——
The setting is very interesting, and everyone is crazy about it. The plot has ups and downs, and some plots have exploded the three views. The text is better than the title, and there are many typos.
What I saw in front of me really made me feel useless. Even if it's a fact, I won't explain it long enough... The ending is very sloppy
It looks good in the front, but it sucks in the back.
When will Naruko release a new book? It's already early September
He's really good-looking, but the ending is too sloppy
The middle is very interesting, but the ending feels a bit sloppy
I really hope to give the heroine a more exciting ending
Is it over so soon?
Nariko answers a few questions: 1. It is indeed completed for the sake of completion. This book is not a matter of whether the data is good or not, it is black, and it is still on the blacklist of the website [faint]. It is already good that it has not been banned. Writing like this on a high school campus is too explicit. If I continue to write, there is a risk of being blocked. I will be devastated [tears] if all my hard work after being blocked for several months is undone. Moreover, the number of readers in the background is in the 30s and 40s every day. There are very few people in the background who are actually reading. According to this loss, basically no one is reading it in less than half a month. 2. The original plan was to abuse the male protagonist, and the female protagonist was abused in the early stage, and then chased his wife in the crematorium. Now the plot has begun to pick up, but it was aborted when it started. The heroine was frustrated at the beginning, and the story was exciting in the later period. However, because of the above reasons, it was about to end before the excitement started [tears] 3. The problem of hasty ending It's definitely sloppy. I could have written about 300 chapters, but the remaining 200 were merged into one chapter. It's very sloppy [drooling] Therefore, in order to avoid being hacked again, the new book has a different story background. This time it is written about adults (who are already honest). The new book will be available in early September. It is also a 1vn counterattack. If you are interested, you can squat.
The ending is too hasty. I stay tuned for updates every day. It's the ending for the sake of the ending.
Part 2: Judging from the copy, I thought it was a light-hearted article about dog training where the female protagonist plays with the male protagonist's group without touching any part of her body. However, the identities are very different and there are 0 normal people + the group's favorite female partner + the heroine's own burdens that she cannot let go of. The heroine is crushed to death. The atmosphere of the whole text is like a story about female abuse in a copy of a horror game. The ending is hasty and the plot is sloppy. The setting and plot are very novel, but there are so many plots that I want to unfold that I can't pull them back. A lot of scenes are added to the supporting characters in order to abuse the heroine. The rhythm is like a high-speed roller coaster that rises and falls repeatedly. It's exciting but the impact is too fierce. The male protagonist's roles are unevenly distributed, and the emotional line is not explained well. There are too many settings for the male protagonists, and 99% of the time, one person's settings can be written into a separate document, and there is no balance. At first, I thought I would conquer the next one after talking to Jiang for a month, but the result is that almost all the text is full of disrespect for the heroine; Ouyang has a close relationship with the vicious female partner, and there is not much room for development; Song was given a complex character, and Mad Wan only tortured the heroine, and there was no revenge in the end. It is written based on my impression of Zhui Wen, so it is normal for there to be some discrepancies. This article has not been found to be a meal replacement and it is the author's first work, so it is well received. ——Original review—— The setting is very interesting, and everyone is crazy about it. The plot has ups and downs, and some plots have exploded the three views. The text is better than the title, and there are many typos.