Sword of Coming: I Snatched Ning Yao From the Start and Became a Great Demon of the Evil Path

We don't read fanfiction just for the thrill and to get all the female characters. You're not doing a good job of getting the female characters, and there's no sense of satisfaction. Do you think your writing can rival the original work? The point of reading fanfiction is to have fun and get all the female characters. Don't make the plot feel frustrating.

It's a mess, it feels like anyone can bully it.

The writing is utterly mediocre, with poor balance between detail and summary.

The author places too much importance on themselves, resulting in a messy and poorly written piece.

The beginning was alright, but it got increasingly weak and the plot became completely messed up.

It's good to watch, but the romance scenes are terrible.

That's utterly disgusting, and you call that demonic cultivation? Your wife is about to draw her sword for you, and you wake up and ask, "Should we still fight?"

Chen Ping'an was simply waiting for the town to fall soar to new heights. Right now, he couldn't obtain anything.

The updates are too slow! I haven't checked for two or three months and there's only this much content.

Did they team up with Chen Suinian on the other side to stop updating?!?!?!?!?!?