I Cultivated Immortality in a Women's Prison. By the Time I Got Out, I Was Invincible

What are you pretending to be? Can't it be cured?

It's still good, not wordy, and the pace is tight, but the ending is a bit too fast. I vote for you.

Why do I stop updating after seeing half of it?

You must keep writing

Stopped updating again yesterday, speechless! ! !

Relax your mind and face everything well

Why are there no updates again? Alas! ! !

The writing is okay, I just read it when I have nothing to do.

In every novel, the protagonist's parents, family, girlfriend, and girlfriend's parents seem to be idiots who don't want them. It's obvious that the protagonists are powerful characters, but they don't tell them.

It looks good, but there are too few updates.