I Become Stronger When I Bump into Ghosts

It's good-looking, but it's too watery.

Is this a romance novel? There are too few ghosts. The main point of the movie is obviously to encounter ghosts, but it has to write about the love between children and ramble on. If it weren't for the fact that your writing was relatively smooth, I wouldn't have been able to give you this praise.

It's just that it's a bit repetitive later on.