The Beginning of Chaos

It looks good so far, but the author should not put double quotes in every sentence. Double quotes can be added when speaking. For example: Ye Hun said: "..." This is right. Instead, add double quotes for the narration and also add them when speaking. Sometimes he doesn't even speak. It would be great if the author made Ye Hun half as good as Fang Yuan

Chi Chi Chi Chi Beibei Beibei No.5

The story is compact and short of nonsense. A young man who does great things does not live in the love of his children. He relies on his own efforts and the indispensable authoritative assistance. However, the improvement of his strength in the end is a bit sloppy. He should have written a few hundred more chapters and added more friends to accompany him for a few more years.

It sounds good, I hope it has a single female protagonist