Reborn: From Academic Failure to Top Student, I Shocked the Entire School

It's a pretty good ending. There's no kidnapping with money. True love is indeed the most beautiful thing in the world, although it's a bit scummy.

I don't know that sometimes the narrative is not directly connected to the context, such as going to the East China Sea to retrieve the teacher, and suddenly the next chapter is about the competition.

Does the plot of this plot need to be so strong? A scammer who is hiding in Tibet will learn fighting and cooking?

It was okay at first, but after a few dozen chapters it started to feel smeared. When talking about campus and love, they are basically mentioned in one sentence, and they are not sweet at all. Instead, all kinds of trivial things go on all day long. After I went to college, I used useless things just to pretend to be poor. I wrote about the harem, but after 150 chapters, I only held hands and kissed at most, and it was all done in one stroke. To put it bluntly, there is no sense of the focus of the story. I talked about campus for a while, started a business for a while, and wrote about love. In the end, none of them highlighted the focus.

When I saw the update, the plot became more and more complicated, and the emotional line became very confusing. I could only read the first 100 chapters, and the more I read the rest, the more upset I became.

Now the more I watch it, the more rubbish it becomes. The emotional line is a mess and the plot development is not that smooth.

Let me talk about this novel. I feel that this novel is not very creative, and the description of emotions is not very delicate. Moreover, the development of the novel is still a little slow. Of course, the portrayal of the male protagonist is still better compared to other novels. It is better than Xiaobai, but not creative enough. If I give it a score, it will be about 8 points. It can be read, but it is easy to get bored.

Judging from the writing and description alone, it's pretty good. But I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the male protagonist's emotional line. Since the male protagonist's girlfriend was written in such a pure love sense, the male protagonist also made a commitment to her. Why did he then have an affair with other women, kiss and sleep with them, and lie to them that he was single? It has nothing to do with his identity. It's really disgusting to describe the male protagonist like this and do such a thing. It's not my feudal tradition, characters and characters, characters and characters are related. You, the author, wrote that the male protagonist admitted that who was his girlfriend, and then almost went to bed with him. He also made a promise to his girlfriend's aunt, but ended up having an affair with the female teacher and also had to go to bed. It's not impossible to write it this way, but it would be weird to put pure love and stallion together. Just looking at the development of the career line, the male protagonist is not bad, and the emotional line in the early stage is also okay, but the emotional line in the later part will make people lose their overall sense of the male protagonist, just like a successful leader who is found to have cheated on his wife. If you write it like this, should the male protagonist think that he can live up to the people around him? What is the difference between this and Shen Feng, who was caught cheating on his wife and went to catch her pregnant. After writing it down, I designated it to be fun. I wrote that the girlfriend is single-minded, and then she finds out what the male protagonist is, or does the male protagonist accept it calmly because of love after a showdown? Female teachers have traditional concepts of love, but also because they love to put aside their pride and be with a male protagonist who has a girlfriend, or become an underground lover? Being a bitch and a mistress for love?

Not bad, I hope the author will update it soon

I experienced the real fighting scenes and emotions, it was really exciting.